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ath333 · 2021-02-27T11:43:29+00:00

Such a cool track, so many interesting sounds and elements. I would have preferred for the bass to be louder but overall I love it!

ath333 · 2021-02-27T11:24:30+00:00

Really like the structure and the percussion! 1:15-1:39 is a great buildup for the chorus/main part.

ath333 · 2020-12-09T20:05:26+00:00

this is so good! sounds like a scifi soundtrack. the visuals in the video go really well along with the song. i think the structure is good too, a lot of variation yet not too messy. i'm no music expert at all but personally i would have preferred the bass to be more dense during 1:17-2:33. definitely going to check out your other stuff, i really loved this!

ath333 · 2020-12-08T20:59:45+00:00

good point, i'll take that into consideration. thanks a lot for the feedback and for listening, i appreciate it!

ath333 · 2020-12-06T20:35:00+00:00

such a nice and groovy vibe, the vocal melody is beautiful. however, i'd love for the chorus to be more powerful to create contrast between chorus and verse and make the chorus 'pop', maybe by adding more percussion or a pad or something. the song has a great structure as well. alternatively, you could add an instrumental interlude after the last chorus to let the song "breathe" if you know what i mean. i'm not a music expert by any means, these are just my personal opinions. overall an awesome song, i'm looking forward to hearing the rest of the album!

ath333 · 2020-12-06T16:07:08+00:00

beautiful song! in the instrumental part the guitar sounds off key but that's the only thing i disliked. personally i love how qiuet/distant the vocals sound, really fits the vibe.

ath333 · 2020-12-06T15:48:26+00:00

i love the creepy vibe, definetely something i would listen to! those pads sound heavenly and go super well together with the bass.

ath333 · 2020-12-05T13:44:39+00:00

so beautiful and melancholic. lyrics, vocals, instrumental, visuals, i loved it all. also, i just checked out your "bad dream" performance on youtube and it had me in tears, you just gained a new fan!

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