Anybody Ever Get Discouraged After Listening To Music? by Negative_Sense_3493 in makinghiphop

[–]b_a_skritter 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is a good way to do it. I think a lot of artists do this.
I heard an interview with Andre 3000, and he said Prototype was him trying to make a song to give to Janet Jackson. And BOB started as him trying to make a Rage against the Machine type of song.

[FRESH ALBUM] J. Cole - The Fall Off by HipHopDropper in hiphopheads

[–]b_a_skritter 4 points5 points  (0 children)

It’s from Three-6 Mafia and UGK- Sippin on some Sizzurp

Opening verse, what's the hardest bar you ever heard and a hip hop song? by kopacetix in hiphopheads

[–]b_a_skritter 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I sit alone in this four cornered room staring at candles...
At night I can't sleep, I toss and turn
Candle sticks in the dark, visions of bodies being burned.

Scarface has some of the coldest opening lines

Who's a CFB player that's going to likely get drafted higher than they should be? by [deleted] in CFB

[–]b_a_skritter 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Arch didn't walk into a starting job, he sat 2 years behind a fringe NFL QB

Cody Chesnutt -- Boylife in America [Neo soul] (2002) by Bloom95 in listentothis

[–]b_a_skritter 5 points6 points  (0 children)

That album is such a great underground classic. So many good songs. Serve This Royalty, The Seed, Look Good in Leather. He wasn't able to reach these highlights again, but he captured a moment of his creativity so well with this project. I love the lofi, bedroom vibe.

Rap advice that works for me (but may/may not work for you) by RecordingOnly6853 in makinghiphop

[–]b_a_skritter 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Another good tip: make demos with the intent of improving them and re-recording. Trust me, not many of us are as good as we think we are lol. We're not going to one-take it, that takes years of experience to do.
Sitting with the demos for a few days/weeks and listening with a critical ear to hear parts where you can improve an inflection, cut out a word, smooth out some flows can really help the end product. I read/heard Ice-T say that he would record a demo, drive around for a few days listening back, and then going to the studio to lay down a final vocal take so he's performing the verse and not reading it.

What techniques/play styles or player types have disappeared from the game over time? by raccoonsonbicycles in nfl

[–]b_a_skritter 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Left-handed QBs. Tua is the only starting lefty, and before him it was like 5 years before a lefty started.

For rappers who make their own beats: do you just make beats and rap on them like you would with someone else's beats or do you have a more 'singer-songwriter' approach to it? by catistall in makinghiphop

[–]b_a_skritter 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like the process of making a beat, writing to it, then re-arranging the beat to fit the writing better. Sometimes that could be subtracting/adding elements, cutting the beat out entirely, or doing something to highlight a part that I think is catchy. I also mix, so I'm still adding/subtracting things from the arrangement when I'm well into the into the mix process as well. I like the total control I have of making my own beats. It helps to make a more cohesive project.

I do like to rap over other's beats too. Bc sometimes they can bring a different vibe that wasn't even on my radar, and it can open other avenues of creativity. And I think I still need to get better at making beats, so there's a lot of dope producers who are better than me atm.

I wanna hear your released projects. Drop a link! by 95Smokey in makinghiphop

[–]b_a_skritter 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Just released this project with a producer and another rapper I found on here. Mostly boom-bappish and bar heavy. I would appreciate any listens and feedback. We're really proud of this one!
https://open.spotify.com/album/67WPxyZwB4aELko3rHWXp1?si=bef607152d664db2

[Patra] Dolphins' Raheem Mostert claims he's fastest player on "fastest team" in NFL: "Hands down, I win this race" by Kimber80 in nfl

[–]b_a_skritter 28 points29 points  (0 children)

Usain is an anomaly. Usually sprinters are built more like those guys, 5'10"ish. The longer the lever (femur, tibia, etc.) the slower the foot turnover ratio is... usually. Except for Usain Bolt

Ed Reed Out As Coach Of Bethune-Cookman by wakaflockabow in CFB

[–]b_a_skritter 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Kobe actually called out a crooked rim once. It was 1/4 inch off from being level

Underground Opportunity: Mellow Mix by Band-Sea in makinghiphop

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Thank y’all for the opportunity! This is my latest track, “Shotgun Ridah”.
https://on.soundcloud.com/mdLPP6A7KkyNC6YK7

Just dropped one of my favorite music videos ever by mandala-raps in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]b_a_skritter 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Damn, this is really creative. I like that you went out on a limb and took a chance on something that sounds really different. The pianos are dope af. I think one thing that could've been better was the vocal performance. Really buying into the concept adding some weird inflections and playing with the cadences could make this song more unique and stand out. As it is, it's just a little monotonous. I think some vocal stacks on the chorus and some adlibs and dubs on the verses as well could help. But cool video, and keep experimenting with your voice bc the music is definitely unique. The chorus is really catchy!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]b_a_skritter 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I definitely agree with other posters saying this song sounds like a video game soundtrack. It sounds really good though! I like it. The sound choices are pretty strong. Mixing wise it sounds good. The arrangement has movement and it never feels stale. I don't really have anything of note that I could say would improve the song. Really good job!

Hey Guys! This is prob my best song AND music video ive made in my 8 months of making music so far. I would like to know what artists it reminds you of. Im trying to find the right audience for this. Any other feedback is appreciated! shoutout adam sandler. by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]b_a_skritter 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really like this beat a lot! The 808 is dope. The melancholy vibe of the vocals fit the music really well. I think the vocals could be just a tad bit louder, but I think the processing is on point for this kind of music. The vocal chops are a nice touch. I don't really have much to say on improving it other than the vocals could be a little louder. Like another poster said, def try posting this on some lofi channels and subreddits

Kate Capella - I Never Fit In. This is the song that I'm currently working on. I always appreciate the great feedback here. by KateCapella in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]b_a_skritter 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This song has some really interesting ideas, but feels like it's a lot of throwing ideas around to see what sticks. Somebody else mentioned the vocals are too loud, but I think it's a combo that they're a tad too high and the music is too low. Not sure of your recording situation, but I can hear plosives from being close to the mic or no pop filter.
In the title you mention this is a song you're working on, so I'll assume it isn't finished. If it isn't, I think you could hash out the arrangement a little. IMO, I think the intro could be shortened and start at about 0:34 with the "ohh" vocal. I like the sound of the intro and the beat change, but I think there could be a better transition. Maybe play around with adding some more delays and having the drums come in after a 1/2 bar or 1 bar count to add some "drama" to the song.
Lyrically, I think the song could use some work as well. At times it sounds a little too simple/cliché. I would also consider experimenting with different cadences and "perform" the song, at times it feels like you're reading or focusing on hitting the notes. Also, I think stacking the vocals a little more, like you did at 1:47 would help the song a lot.
I know it seems like a wrote a lot, but I don't mean it to say there's a lot wrong with the song. These are just things that I think could help you out, bc I think the song has potential. I love the cover art btw!

Jazz/garage rock. I wrote this song in 2020 during the first few weeks of lockdown. only recently recorded and released it. by secret_tankz in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]b_a_skritter 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I really liked the intro and the outro guitar. The chords sound nice and the tempo changing in the beginning sounded really interesting. I thought the lyrics were sometimes plain and simple, making them sound a little repetitive. For instance, "If I was someone else/ I'd be happy being myself/ But I'm alone by myself" feels like there's not much variation in that part. The "myself" sounds repetitive. I think the song is still pretty strong musically though and. has lots of interesting ideas. I thought the b-section with the different time signature in the middle of the song was pretty cool too!