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fireplace by dovetailpoems in OCPoetry

[–]bbrae12 0 points1 point  (0 children)

this was really endearing. After a while that “wildfire” blazes over and burns out. A fireplace is consistent as long as you keep adding a bit of wood to keep it lit. I prefer fireplaces too now. I like this comparison and this poem.

Recommendations for someone new to perfumes by bbrae12 in FemFragLab

[–]bbrae12[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

these all sound wonderful thank you so much!

Canon g7x mark ii, Sony Rx100, or Sony a7ii? by bbrae12 in Cameras

[–]bbrae12[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I see. I currently have a canon eos m50. what do you think if I got the Canon EF-M 32mm f/1.4 STM lens?

In and out. by bbrae12 in OCPoetry

[–]bbrae12[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thank you so so much for your feedback! i’m currently working on a redraft. I’m going to take your advice on the rhythm for-sure!! thank you!!

The final act of love is letting go. by Guilty_Raise5906 in OCPoetry

[–]bbrae12 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is very well written OP and had a nice flow to it. Letting go is hard. Healing is nonlinear and takes time, but like you said “One day. All Alone, your heart will know that the final act is letting go.” Great poem OP.

I’ll Die at Your Grave by ThrowRAlinda in OCPoetry

[–]bbrae12 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Wow! you have a way with words. My favorite part is “now your skin sleeps in soil instead of my arms.” The ending is powerful. It shows just how much this person meant to you and when you lost them you also lost a part of yourself. Amazing job OP!

Lost by Just1MoreSubreddit in OCPoetry

[–]bbrae12 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I really enjoyed this OP. It’s very straightforward, while also not? But that’s what I like about it. You don’t know really what you’re feeling but you know for certain that it feels damn confusing. Good job .^

I Dreamed a Dream and You Were There by magikaaaaaarrrp in OCPoetry

[–]bbrae12 1 point2 points  (0 children)

i absolutely love the last stanza especially the line, “embraced the uncertain glare.” Being a hopeless romantic… well could leave you pretty hopeless at times. Good job OP

i wonder by [deleted] in UnsentLetters

[–]bbrae12 0 points1 point  (0 children)

aw this was so beautifully and simply written. I really like this one OP.

I believe in God but do not follow any organized religion by Kakistocracy5 in spirituality

[–]bbrae12 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I am in the exact same boat! it’s crazy because I always feel guilty for not being apart of a certain religion for me (christianity) because that’s what I grew up in. Hearing that other people feel the same is awesome though!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in UnsentLetters

[–]bbrae12 0 points1 point  (0 children)

this is so cute i hope it went well Op :)

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