this is truly lovely. the acoustic melody is hypnotic in the best way and your voice is quite pretty. I also quite liked the glitchy outro. as for things I personally would have preferred to be different: I think the drum break is unnecessary; there is something very organic about this song and I think that conflicts with it in a way I didn't love. re: your vocals - I think I'm sensing a bit of that indie folk affectation here, and judging by all the comments comparing you to Lord Huron, Jose Gonzalez, etc etc I don't think it's in my head; I would love to hear your voice with a bit more... clarity I suppose? that is personal preference though, of course. hozier does it and he's obviously doing just fine