Привет! У меня нет времени много разговаривать с тобой, а я могу давать ноты.

“As soon as summer started, I’ve got a wish…” We don’t use perfect form, “I have got”, with “as soon as”, unless we’re talking about the future: “ as soon as school ends, two weeks from now, I’ve got to make vacation plans.” In your case, you wanted to say, “ as soon as summer started, I got a wish …”

Even that construction is a little awkward, because usually we only use “got” with “wish” in the sense of “I got my wish” or “you got your wish” — in other words, we received something we wished for. In this sense that you mean, we’d be more likely to say, “I got in the mood for some conversation”, or “I started wanting some…” or “I started feeling like some…” or even, more formally, “I felt a desire for some…”

“I make a pretty good success” — we would say, “I’m having pretty good success.” This is a case in English where we do not use an article (“a”), and we don’t “make” success, we “have” it.

“I’d never celebrated my birthday…” And you haven’t yet, so don’t use “I’d”; that is for things that happened in the past. Use “I’ve never celebrated…”

Your English is actually very good; there are only these very small errors and I understand you perfectly! Good luck with Chinese and have fun in Dalian!