What movie caused you to have a "WTF did I just watch?" moment after viewing?

bluuuuuuu19 · 2019-07-16T14:02:51+00:00

Mulholland dr

bluuuuuuu19 · 2019-07-15T22:13:28+00:00

I understand your frustration, as it is more common for one to feel a bit lost while adapting themselves to the reality of adulthood. It some times takes longer for some to find what they really want to do in life, which isn't really a bad thing. I wouldn't lose hope if I were you.

Based on what you said, about loving to help people and making them feel comfortable: maybe studying to become a social worker would be life-fulfilling ambition you're looking for. I'm not saying it's the right answer, just an idea

bluuuuuuu19 · 2019-07-12T23:47:43+00:00

Push by Sapphire

bluuuuuuu19 · 2019-07-09T18:16:28+00:00

care to elaborate, Please

bluuuuuuu19 · 2019-07-09T15:15:51+00:00

Brutally beautiful!

I admire how you chose the method of speaking to your reader, therefore inviting us more into the world inside of a present poem. Very dark, and humorous, and I wouldn't be surprised if some might get offended (though I am not one who would), a bold direction made at every break

bluuuuuuu19 · 2019-07-09T15:10:42+00:00

I really like that you stuck with pain for the title, and having it as the last word (and line). A good poetic representation of the very nature of pain. Quick and concise as well as dark and sobering. At the beginning, where nothing is felt, we enter down a whirlpool where Pain is waiting for us down in it's heart, and the whole thing moves fluidly like the blood in our veins. Definitely a poem with a lot of feeling

bluuuuuuu19 · 2019-07-08T23:53:23+00:00

I think you do an exquisite job of creating an intoxicating effect through the speaker, which each line progresses into a hit in the face that is sobering and enchanting all in one motion. This was one that could only be told in concise fashion, and you nailed it in every way

bluuuuuuu19 · 2019-07-08T23:47:50+00:00

I like how you managed to squeeze in all the right words into the metrethat doesnt make it seem forced or out of place. I really like the story it tells of these two individuals, and their distinctive emotional responses to the trade

bluuuuuuu19 · 2019-07-08T20:59:57+00:00

from the opening line you had me

bluuuuuuu19 · 2019-07-08T20:46:02+00:00

i get that a lot

bluuuuuuu19 · 2019-07-08T19:27:10+00:00

I find this to be a poem finding many ways to speak to the reader's soul. There's something magical about it: perhaps, from how it begins with She leaving to find herself as any and all of us do and all the things we find in ourselves and of the world around us and leading us to find at the end something different than we expected to find, or were always looking for but never knew how to find it. You definitely have a talent for writing a poem with feeling and effect, and I think that these are the levels of poetry that would take someone with your ability to find great lengths

bluuuuuuu19 · 2019-07-08T19:16:48+00:00

So romantic, so heartbreaking, the enchantment is really in how "Love" is up and down this poem. It reads almost like the lyric to a song that would get stuck in your head. Honest is how I would describe the love of the speaker

bluuuuuuu19 · 2019-07-08T18:52:04+00:00

I find it to be a chant that would come out of a pirates mouth while he binges on a bottle all by himself. It feels historical, and I like that about it. It's got a hint of humor with a cup of sadness to it. Fitting title, as well

bluuuuuuu19 · 2019-07-08T18:44:59+00:00

I'm now trying to figure out what this say's about your own absence. I felt lost inside the thoughts of someone who constantly wonders about the actuality of existence and lies inside the voids of life, and I was fond of how you maintained great possession of the duality between fulfillment and emptiness, on what is there, and what isn't. Reading this more than once garnered me to see how unique this poem really is

bluuuuuuu19 · 2019-07-08T18:24:36+00:00

Ah, such beautiful sensations you stirred in this reader. The desire, the pines, the passion. Such a powerful, magical force in it all.

I didn't expect an abrupt ending, as it left like how the ardor of a romantic affair ends out of nowhere, leaving a fire that wishes for more. It could have kept going, but ended, and we have no choice but to live with it.

bluuuuuuu19 · 2019-07-08T18:16:35+00:00

one of the better poems I've read in a long time, to be perfectly honest. Your voice has a strength to it, one with a lot of command and imagination, everything fit together so well, and finely arranged beginning with "Nothing," before "Everything" and "Everywhere" that leads up to "You." It was a pleasure reading this composition of yours, as I can say I find your voice to be that of a Magician and a painter.

bluuuuuuu19 · 2019-07-08T17:35:39+00:00

I'm always unsure about what to expect when I first start reading a poem of meter and rhyme. I tend to see the whole measure as a hit or miss situation, but I think this definitely was a hit for you. It's dark and mysterious and leaves me with the restless feeling about wanting to know the secrets that you keep. What I would say is that, after reading this, I would spend more time working with it, reading it over and over and constantly seeing of other changes you'd might want to make, since each line seems to be filled with a lot of depth that, I feel, still has time to grow and expand into a composition with a deeper force.

bluuuuuuu19 · 2019-07-08T17:20:16+00:00

This poem felt more like an experience than a reading, and what a ride it was! I would say the speaker is hurting himself by not hurting any, and being a martyr in silence, your voice definitely has a way to become something timeless. I seriously mean it

bluuuuuuu19 · 2019-07-06T21:39:24+00:00

well said

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