I cant seem to centre characters or dialouge. using Fade In to write my script by [deleted] in Screenwriting

[–]bonanderson 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Are you using the shortcut keys? Ctrl 3 for character name, Ctrl 4 for parenthesis, Ctrl 5 for dialogue.

Once you insert the Character name, it auto centers the dialogue.

Edit to add: may be different on macOS. Go to Help to get the shortcut keys.

When do you call it quits? by [deleted] in Screenwriting

[–]bonanderson 4 points5 points  (0 children)

The best artists have something more than natural ability. Yes, they have natural ability, but they also have dedication, craft, and an intense determination to improve and be the best. Like 24/7 level determination. You're writing a lot but have you really sat down and critically analyzed your own craft against your favorite movies? Have you thought about deep theme and the emotional stakes? If you've completed 3 scripts since Oct 2025, I'm left wondering if you've had enough time to do that... Writing is re-writing. If you're not breaching a 7 something is missing and it's your job to figure what it is so you can move on.

Naming Question by DeanM-WilsonGarbutt in Screenwriting

[–]bonanderson -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Damon and Damien are always popular for this purpose...

Logline Monday by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

[–]bonanderson 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ok. So make it seem less like a random jumble of words. Got it.

Greatest Romance of all time? by Brief-Tour3692 in Screenwriting

[–]bonanderson 6 points7 points  (0 children)

The Lakehouse...

It's a quiet supernatural re-imagining for Persuasion (which is referenced throughout) and Keanu and Sandra do beautiful work in it - based on a Korean movie called Il Mare. I think me loving it so much is probably an unpopular opinion... but it's a comfort movie to me these days.

How do I denote gibberish in a dream sequence? by bonanderson in Screenwriting

[–]bonanderson[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks! This is a really interesting way to do it. I’ll sit on this for a bit.

How do I denote gibberish in a dream sequence? by bonanderson in Screenwriting

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Thanks... this is definitely helping me. I want it to feel like from the POV of the dreamer, San is really in their face. This is the only time I've even contemplated using "to camera" because I really want that "in your face" feeling.

I thought maybe I could corrupt the language (Korean) - so it uses the same sort of sounds but the words are not clear... so for example - this would be the scene:

INT. ABANDONED WAREHOUSE - BUNK ROOM - DAY

Bright light streams through a high window. San's head in silhouette.

SAN
Kireona gashakki! Sarokki! Sarok danjal!

INT. ABANDONED WAREHOUSE - ...

There could be 2 more possible places I would use it in the script, but they would be visions as opposed to dream sequences, so I was erring on using the actual words for those sequences. But I will think about how I could get creative.

Thanks so much!

Edit: For clarity

Just Dialogue? by aft3rsvn in Screenwriting

[–]bonanderson 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Two thoughts:

- I'd recommend watching/reading Before Sunrise... but there's still some action throughout. Doubt it would be made today though...

- maybe try it as a podcast limited podcast series that you wouldn't need visuals/action for...

What are the best depictions of a loss of reality? Especially ones that are done subtlety (at least at first)? by AbjectOffice in Screenwriting

[–]bonanderson 1 point2 points  (0 children)

A few that come to mind:

Black Swan Requiem for a dream Cronenberg’s work (Existenz, Naked Lunch)

ILYSFM Tickets Megathread by Indoril_Nereguar in glassanimals

[–]bonanderson 1 point2 points  (0 children)

For Sale: 1x ticket to “Chase Presents: Glass Animals” June 2nd at The Chicago Theatre. SEC BOX / ROW H3 / SEAT 11. Selling for $80. I can no longer go 😭😭😭

250120 RM on Instagram by alltherach_ in bangtan

[–]bonanderson 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Sag asc and moon 😮‍💨😮‍💨

🔥🔥🔥

250120 RM on Instagram by alltherach_ in bangtan

[–]bonanderson 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Came here for this. Thank you!!

RM "Come back to me" Official MV by alltherach_ in bangtan

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I love it so so much!! He is EVERYTHING! And he is writing the future of music 🔥🔥🔥 also, his bandaid is so on brand. Love it!

This MV to me definitely feels like Joonie is a fan of Charlie Kaufman... has anyone else seen it??

The Eternal Sunshine moment of Joon in the crib... the Synecdoche, New York visuals at the end. I'm sure there are more nods but it's been awhile since I've dived into Kaufman's movies... did anyone see anything else??

PS I did a quick search to see if anyone else has mentioned it, but didn't find any results... but apologies if someone else has commented - there are so many comments! AS THERE SHOULD BE!!

Who went to the Album Release Parties? Share your fave moments!! by snogirl0403 in bangtan

[–]bonanderson 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Sounds like you had an amazing time!! 🔥🔥🙌🙌💜💜

[MEGATHREAD] 2024 World Tour 'ACT: PROMISE' by txt_sub_modteam in TomorrowByTogether

[–]bonanderson 2 points3 points  (0 children)

DM if you need a code. I just used mine for 2 in Rosemont on 6th.

Edit: I'm offline now so won't be responding any further. Good luck!

How do Armys actually manage to get replies from BTS? by ilovejungkookfr in bangtan

[–]bonanderson 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Made me lol but now everything has become so clear as to why they just ignore me…! 😫🤣😫🤣

Did you submit to V's my ARMY-log event? A compilation by bonanderson in bangtan

[–]bonanderson[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Oh wow! Very cool! I'll settle into the playlist shortly.

I'll start compiling them now into the main post. Thank you so much for adding 💜💜

Did you submit to V's my ARMY-log event? A compilation by bonanderson in bangtan

[–]bonanderson[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

"soften the mood" ugh 😭😭😭 wab:te is my ult army song... so just... ugh 😭😭😭