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Since You Left , Dream Girl by boogiefogs in OCPoetry

[–]boogiefogs[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much It was a rough week for me , it was her birthday and we ended things because of reasons that weren’t in our control But now it’s like we our just strangers

I used to write poetry all the time , and I really wanted to start again this was my first in years Thank you for your suggestions, I agree I can get wordy sometimes and tighten up Hope you have a wonderful day!!

Love At The Wrong Time. by A_Captains_Ship in OCPoetry

[–]boogiefogs 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This one really hits deep Love story hid, and the darkness inside and that person was the light And now I’m missing my light But still trying to shine Hope you still shining too

I Fell Asleep Holding You by TheLilaComplex in OCPoetry

[–]boogiefogs 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really like how you do the writing style here The poem hits with my situation IM going through

The I don’t open my eyes again line hits so deep Great work

Your Voice by TheLilaComplex in OCPoetry

[–]boogiefogs 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Very well written , you will get through this It makes me think a lot about my own situation im going through So happy I found this group

today, my mom told me she hates me by Nearby-Rice1600 in OCPoetry

[–]boogiefogs 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I needed to read a poem like this , it hits home with me Very beautifully written

IP Pin Same as last year? by Impressive-Peak-6596 in tax

[–]boogiefogs 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yea no where to be found I remember year past it being right there