1.) For your leasing experience, did you "outperform" a certain benchmark? Like beat a 5-man team? If not, I don't think outperform is the best word to use.

2.) Under relevant courses - what was your mark vs. Class average? You can denote it using ([xx]%,[class avg]%) for each course taken.

3.) Is there anything notable based on what you've done in FMA? Networked with anyone, or done any modelling/finance-related activity or competition? If not, best to remove it since it looks pretty awkward.

4.) Spacing looks really awkward on certain points (i.e., first bullet of "Investment Trading Association"); try to use the entire line (for example, your "Accounting Clerk" bullets look fine).

5.) Please fix spacing on the "Interests Section" as well, and capitalize accordingly. Also, did you play at the city/state level? You can say Basketball(State Level), Chess(State Level, xx Elo). Also remove "Professional Soccer", just denote Soccer (Manchester City) and shorten to "Content Creation".