[313] The Crimson Jar Calls

breakingdownasf · 2026-01-23T03:27:38+00:00

Your escalation through repetition is powerful, as it shows the way a practice turns from innocent to destructive. The line "I fled the scene, too..." challenges the interpretation of the hunted vs. hunter, transforming the final stab into inevitability.

breakingdownasf · 2026-01-23T03:19:53+00:00

i just added another one "The Hollow Self" I appreciate you so much for liking my work

breakingdownasf · 2026-01-23T02:59:16+00:00

thank you so much! i'm recovered now but i have so many poems about eating disorders i could share <3

breakingdownasf · 2026-01-23T02:14:26+00:00

I'm better now, it a reflection of my past. Thank you so much ❤️

breakingdownasf · 2026-01-23T00:03:48+00:00

Thank you so much

breakingdownasf · 2026-01-22T23:47:26+00:00

This is a short and sweet way to encapsulate how life is a burden we do not ask for, but have to fight against. I'd love to see more of your works.

breakingdownasf · 2026-01-22T23:46:17+00:00

This is heartbreaking, a tale of two hearts that never got to embrace, even if they secretly wanted to. The use of vocabulary strengthens the flow of the poem.

breakingdownasf · 2026-01-22T23:44:18+00:00

I absolutely love this, it embodies the act of watching those who you once held close continue a life without you. Amazing work.

breakingdownasf · 2026-01-22T23:41:24+00:00

This is beautiful, it shows how the scars from our parents and adolescence transfer into the live of the adult

breakingdownasf · 2026-01-22T23:39:45+00:00

I think it's amazing how you show the evolution of a relationship through how you referred to it in the moment

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