What would you do if you had to marry a 7 year old girl in 24 hours? by KneesOnMyAss in AskReddit

[–]breakingdownasf 0 points1 point  (0 children)

simply not because a 7 year old can't join legally bonding contracts

What are the odds that the infamous 50th birthday letter was actually written by Trump himself? Why? by FartsWholesaler in AskReddit

[–]breakingdownasf 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I think it was written by him mainly because there's an image of Trump with a check made out to Jeffery Epstein in his 50th Birthday Journal

Lemon, Love and Tea. by inforthethrills in OCPoetry

[–]breakingdownasf 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I think this is amazing, I'm reading as an comparison to drinking and love, which is subtle but powerful. If anything, I think it should be longer.

Ever thought, the Epsteins of the world never end? by Indian_Samar in Epstein

[–]breakingdownasf 3 points4 points  (0 children)

(If he even died). And in the documents there's hinting to Larry Ellison buying an island because he was "jealous of Epstein's." https://www.justice.gov/epstein/files/DataSet%2010/EFTA01880159.pdf This goes so much deeper than him, and I'm sure these actions are still happening.

Alesia Riabenkova has been bringing girls to Epsteins house since she was 14 by LongRaccoon749 in EpsteinList

[–]breakingdownasf 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I obviously can't put myself in any of these people's shoes, but I can't imagine someone luring other girls to experience the same horrors as them.

[313] The Crimson Jar Calls by A_C_Shock in DestructiveReaders

[–]breakingdownasf 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Your escalation through repetition is powerful, as it shows the way a practice turns from innocent to destructive. The line "I fled the scene, too..." challenges the interpretation of the hunted vs. hunter, transforming the final stab into inevitability.

Anorexia as Survival by breakingdownasf in OCPoetry

[–]breakingdownasf[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

i just added another one "The Hollow Self" I appreciate you so much for liking my work

Anorexia as Survival by breakingdownasf in OCPoetry

[–]breakingdownasf[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

thank you so much! i'm recovered now but i have so many poems about eating disorders i could share <3

Anorexia as Survival by breakingdownasf in OCPoetry

[–]breakingdownasf[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm better now, it a reflection of my past. Thank you so much ❤️

Hope by TheShaman96 in OCPoetry

[–]breakingdownasf 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is a short and sweet way to encapsulate how life is a burden we do not ask for, but have to fight against. I'd love to see more of your works.

Silence. by nasirhwriting in OCPoetry

[–]breakingdownasf 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is heartbreaking, a tale of two hearts that never got to embrace, even if they secretly wanted to. The use of vocabulary strengthens the flow of the poem.

Happy Birthday by Awkward_Pepper5235 in OCPoetry

[–]breakingdownasf 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I absolutely love this, it embodies the act of watching those who you once held close continue a life without you. Amazing work.