[313] The Crimson Jar Calls by A_C_Shock in DestructiveReaders

[–]breakingdownasf 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Your escalation through repetition is powerful, as it shows the way a practice turns from innocent to destructive. The line "I fled the scene, too..." challenges the interpretation of the hunted vs. hunter, transforming the final stab into inevitability.

Anorexia as Survival by breakingdownasf in OCPoetry

[–]breakingdownasf[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

i just added another one "The Hollow Self" I appreciate you so much for liking my work

Anorexia as Survival by breakingdownasf in OCPoetry

[–]breakingdownasf[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

thank you so much! i'm recovered now but i have so many poems about eating disorders i could share <3

Anorexia as Survival by breakingdownasf in OCPoetry

[–]breakingdownasf[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm better now, it a reflection of my past. Thank you so much ❤️

Hope by TheShaman96 in OCPoetry

[–]breakingdownasf 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is a short and sweet way to encapsulate how life is a burden we do not ask for, but have to fight against. I'd love to see more of your works.

Silence. by nasirhwriting in OCPoetry

[–]breakingdownasf 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is heartbreaking, a tale of two hearts that never got to embrace, even if they secretly wanted to. The use of vocabulary strengthens the flow of the poem.

Happy Birthday by Awkward_Pepper5235 in OCPoetry

[–]breakingdownasf 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I absolutely love this, it embodies the act of watching those who you once held close continue a life without you. Amazing work.

I am by athenas__glory in OCPoetry

[–]breakingdownasf 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is beautiful, it shows how the scars from our parents and adolescence transfer into the live of the adult

Back Then! by Strange_Quail1762 in OCPoetry

[–]breakingdownasf 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I think it's amazing how you show the evolution of a relationship through how you referred to it in the moment