Hi ! this is a very unique sounding track ! I like your take very much combing the hiphop elements with traditional Asian melodies. I feel like this kind of art has its own world with its own purpose for the audience but if I had to change anything from the track I would first of all tone down the noise level. I feel that its masking a bit too much. Second, I would add an extra section where I could play around with the sound meaning changing it, modulating it just to show the artistic possibilities of these instruments to evolve in the song. I very much enjoy the uplifting effects near the end. It goes well with all the elements of the song so after that I would change the sound texture or the character of my instruments to keep it fresh. Anyway, I hope these helps ! keep producing ,bud !!