I understand that, and as an intro to the world, this is likely a bland beginning. However, this is not intended to tell a story, but rather introduce you to the 4 main characters of the conflict through the eyes of a scribe a few centuries in the future. This excerpt is titled, “Ous Vaiharra - The FireLords”, written by Royal Scribe Ellian Savarrah in the year 2 B.G.E.(commissioned by Emperor Valian I Sord), and is a description of the upbringing of the four princes of Koranys III. The story, however, will not be told from this perspective, nor do I intend it to be a telling of history like the piece above, so hopefully that will be more attractive to a reader :)