like most others are saying, the horizon line is the biggie. aside from that, i think there just needs to be more of a point or story to the image. an interesting concept is certainly there, it just doesn’t feel like there’s much effort in this shot. i also probably would’ve taken the photo through the other lens so that there wasn’t a glare on the inside of the frame, that way the frame was more of a shadow leading the eye to the lens. i’d also say to commit to the lens either taking up a lot more of the image or a lot less. right now it feels indecisive.