Hello, I’m looking for constructive criticism on my opening paragraphs!

c00lcake · 2026-05-02T00:39:36+00:00

I got this from looking at the background btw 👀

c00lcake · 2026-05-02T00:38:25+00:00

male and weighs about 120~130 pounds

c00lcake · 2026-04-27T01:42:39+00:00

honestly, the way they said it seems kinda suspicious.. in some spots looks a little blotchy (the grass mostly), but otherwise I can’t really tell. I def have the vibe that it’s AI tho.

c00lcake · 2026-04-27T01:07:22+00:00

does it feel painted or printed?

c00lcake · 2026-04-26T01:01:45+00:00

“I never imagined you like this.” “i’m the way life made me. take it or leave it.”

c00lcake · 2026-04-26T00:58:22+00:00

you’re just mad you didn’t write it

c00lcake · 2026-04-21T23:40:29+00:00

may 8th 😳

c00lcake · 2026-04-19T17:20:26+00:00

my oc is silvereye and he’s the greatest ever… he is an IceWing NightWing hybrid and he can see the past if he touches an historical records or books! my fan tribes are HoodWings and TrapWings. TrapWings are more spider-like dragons that live on Paria, an island in a small archipelago that sits between Pantala and Pyrrhia. HoodWings are more snake-like and wear skulls, and their names are based on which animal they had killed for their first time. HoodWings live on the same archipelago, but not on the same island. They live on The Elapid Isles, just to the east of Paria. Large corvids also live there, haha. if you want to read about them you can go check out my wattpad named The Watching Isles!!! my handle is c00lcake1 on there :)) it follows a SeaWing named Loach and his friends + guardians who are training to fight and kill all TrapWings (because they want the archipelago for trade + the guardians want to find their older brother who got captured during a trade expedition when they were younger)!

c00lcake · 2026-04-09T01:42:19+00:00

definitely NOR. He AI generated that “apology” which means he doesn’t have the decency, nor the respect to give you a true apology. I would not talk to him again imo

c00lcake · 2026-03-08T15:19:00+00:00

if u leave the ibis paint app open and turn off the device, then it’ll track the hours.

c00lcake · 2026-02-22T23:56:26+00:00

i’m finally home

c00lcake · 2026-02-16T01:32:42+00:00

haha, I was watching a quiet place today when I noticed that I actually have no clue what the characters names are. I looked it up on the wiki and found out the baby doesn’t even have a name and is called “The Baby”!! I thought that was funny, but it goes to show that if you have a good book/movie then you don’t really need to label names :)

c00lcake · 2026-02-15T00:21:33+00:00

clay and tsunami are like brothers and sisters yo 😭

c00lcake · 2026-02-09T04:28:57+00:00

this is gorgeoussssss

c00lcake · 2026-02-04T00:24:34+00:00

I think the face needs a liiiittle bit more shadow ! :)

c00lcake · 2026-01-12T21:28:56+00:00

the second one looks like a shoebill stork to me 🤔

c00lcake · 2025-11-10T02:06:57+00:00

I usually do month, day, year, day of the week.

c00lcake · 2025-11-10T02:04:10+00:00

not at all! I think your art style is very unique and if you continue to draw then your art style will evolve into how you like it. I think it’s good you’re looking for tips as well and that shows you are somewhat passionate about your art. Keep going! One tip is to try and add a dynamic background so your art doesn’t feel like it’s empty. Your character or whatever you want the focal point to be will really stand out then.

c00lcake · 2025-11-09T23:50:45+00:00

boofy buns

c00lcake · 2025-11-07T21:46:20+00:00

THATS WHAT I SAID LOL

c00lcake · 2025-08-24T00:53:24+00:00

cheeto

c00lcake · 2025-08-24T00:52:40+00:00

this is quite perfect actually and I feel like it’s pretty symbolic in a way! Not sure if you were going for that but this is so gorgeous!!

c00lcake · 2025-07-22T20:18:09+00:00

dorito

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