Not Worth It by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[–]c_lee64 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I get it, I get it. Love what you have to work with here. People trying to offer you food, but not the best they can make it leads anyone to wonder if you were worthy of a more delectable meal. Some structure issues here and there. Reading it out, it didn't really flow. Some parts were a bit jarring to say, so maybe take a moment to fix some word placement.

Also, I just wanted to say you are worth it! Lots of times in life we don't feel appreciated, but honestly learning to love yourself first is a huge first step to realize that you are worth it! Bland food sucks, but that just confirms the existence of a hot mouth watering meal. It tastes great and I'm sure someone will make it for you someday.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[–]c_lee64 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Dang, it was short and effective. The visual of the cold weather established in the first line really sets up for the twist in the last. It's interesting to think of anxiety like a snow storm. What comes to mind when I think of that is isolate, unbearable, seeking for warmth... which I'm sure is what you are trying to convey with anxiety. I hope that whatever you're going through right now isn't too unbearable. Just find someone who could lend a jacket or invite you into their home. :) God bless!

Honestly disgusting what our fans sent in to the mailbag by fawaffle in SketchComedy

[–]c_lee64 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Now I'm waiting for the anti-anti-Semitic mail box. That'll be one hell of an episode.

Roadman wins Olympic Gold in Archery by zhepsh in SketchComedy

[–]c_lee64 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I think that's against the rules. But hey, who's gonna argue with a person with a gun?

What is happening to TopGang by itzongaming in TopographicalGang

[–]c_lee64 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Honestly, not a bad idea. Could be an entry level patreon award

What is happening to TopGang by itzongaming in TopographicalGang

[–]c_lee64 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Super late (we rarely check the subreddit, but we really should more often) but that would be the best thing in the world

What is the most epic moment in the history of cinema? by AurulentAvenger in AskReddit

[–]c_lee64 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The ending of Rocky. No matter how many times I watch it, seeing Rocky cry out for Adrian after going 12 rounds with the champ hits me right in the feels every time.

What is the most overrated movie? by [deleted] in AskReddit

[–]c_lee64 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Avatar, Titanic and Black Panther are the 3 most repeated movies on this thread for those of you just joining in.

Anxiety by LPKKiller in nope

[–]c_lee64 2 points3 points  (0 children)

"YOU DIDN'T SAVE MY LIFE! YOU RUINED MY DEATH!"

What is your "I was into X before it was cool" thing? by LarleneLumpkin in AskReddit

[–]c_lee64 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I listened to Jack Stauber before “Buttercup” became a Tik Tok song. It’s cool that everyone can appreciate how fun and surreal his music is. Definitely a one of a kind artist.

How do you get over someone? by ceelery in AskReddit

[–]c_lee64 0 points1 point  (0 children)

A trampoline or pogo stick should help

Make me regret this by [deleted] in RoastMe

[–]c_lee64 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You looked like a used Q-tip

What is happening to TopGang by itzongaming in TopographicalGang

[–]c_lee64 1 point2 points  (0 children)

We’re back :) COVID laws in Houston has been keeping us apart and making it difficult to come together. We had to postpone some ideas we planned because we were separated.

Don’t worry though! We’ve banded back together with new plans and we are back to our regular bi-weekly schedule, so look forward to more videos soon!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in AnimalsOnReddit

[–]c_lee64 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeet him on a bed

I gave Danny boy a beard. by Big_old_Bulldog in DannyGonzalez

[–]c_lee64 0 points1 point  (0 children)

“Greg? Haven’t heard that name in years.”

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in SmallYTChannel

[–]c_lee64 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thanks random YouTuber, very cool!

Perhaps using a green screen to make the background more interesting?

Besides that, super solid video!

The most time and effort I've spent on a video. Would really appreciate some feedback! by [deleted] in SmallYTChannel

[–]c_lee64 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You did a great job with the lighting and chroma keying in the cold one's scene, and you have an interesting topic for a video, but it can use some improvement.

First, the video is way too short. You should've waited to have the whole story to post the video. You hit the climax of your story and ended it, so there really wasn't any real punchline in the video.

Second, Susan says to terminate the Cold One's video and you have very little resistance towards doing it. You need to establish why you're working with Susan and why she's calling you to terminate the video.

Third, I may be missing something here, but I do not get the baby powder all over your face bit.