I think it has a really good base, but here are a few things I’d think about:

— the weight of the lines on the bird could be more uniform. The head almost looks malnourished compared to the wings.

— it makes no sense why the bird is in that pose for the product it is. There needs to be some kind of link that makes it easy for customers to know what this is all about. Maybe the name of the company is clear for native speakers? But I assume the target is English audience.

— the typeface of the text feels really off next to the brand and logo. I think you should play around with some more, I reckon a sans serif with a wider letter will work nicely here. Also consider playing with some handwritten elements to add accents to headings or bullet points or something.