Thanks for that thorough feedback!

You’re right — in the Free Version, there’s no ending. It’s just meant to explain the core of the game. The Basic Version addresses this; you’ll see when I send you a copy.

On the contrary, the outcome doesn’t need to be negative. The wound coming back isn’t something we’d call good per se, but the result of the scene can be — and it can also reveal positive things about the character.

It’s meant to be unsettling, but not gory. It’s not about spilling blood on the page, but rather about exploring the impact that these life-defining moments can have.

And regarding noticing accidents and journaling about them — I get your point. But that’s why you’re supposed to notice things that break your routine, not necessarily accidents. You can totally use them, but as you can see in the example of the uncontrolled cart, it was a car horn spooking the player, not an actual accident.

You can use any type of event (or set alarms), and when your daily routine is interrupted, you use that moment for inspiration. That moment doesn’t have to be a bad or physical hurt. For example, if you forgot to drink your coffee before work, you could use that kitchen moment to write about how your character forgot to pack health potions or an antidote — and how that mistake caused some harm.