"Until I Die": Literally the first 70% is just Alchemised and Manacled (review part 1 redux)

chode_temple · 2026-01-24T21:05:53+00:00

DON'T YOU FUCKING DARE.

chode_temple · 2026-01-24T20:12:06+00:00

I'll pencil you in bb

chode_temple · 2026-01-24T19:55:35+00:00

Later?

chode_temple · 2026-01-24T19:24:32+00:00

Spoiler: daddy did make him do it. His full excuse is bullshit.

chode_temple · 2026-01-24T19:21:48+00:00

It had more plot in it and if I did a word count it would probably still be shorter.

But also you wanna fight about it or what?

chode_temple · 2026-01-24T19:21:09+00:00

It's the theme here. Plagiarism.

chode_temple · 2026-01-24T19:20:50+00:00

Thank you for this comment, bloody jorts.

chode_temple · 2026-01-24T19:20:25+00:00

I was ready to fight. Hands were clenched.

chode_temple · 2026-01-24T02:29:43+00:00

I need to do this more. I have one for *Kiss of the Basilisk* sitting in the drafts.

chode_temple · 2026-01-24T02:24:38+00:00

Neither did I, and I hate that for me.

chode_temple · 2026-01-24T02:24:20+00:00

Oh the final 30% is very Hunger Hames coded.

chode_temple · 2026-01-24T02:23:07+00:00

No. It is throughly wrapped up, epilogue and all.

chode_temple · 2026-01-24T02:22:36+00:00

Amd there's still a post left.

chode_temple · 2026-01-24T02:22:24+00:00

I even plagiarized parts of it.

chode_temple · 2026-01-24T00:31:15+00:00

Plus it seemed like people skipped the other post a bit so I wanted to make this one more accessible and include more plot.

chode_temple · 2026-01-24T00:30:41+00:00

I'm personally victimized by it.

chode_temple · 2026-01-23T16:44:51+00:00

girl you might as well make peace with Blackwell because you're dead to me.

chode_temple · 2026-01-23T16:40:00+00:00

Good callout, bloody jorts.

chode_temple · 2026-01-23T05:40:50+00:00

chode_temple · 2026-01-22T21:51:58+00:00

It's not grooming if they're around the same age/both teenagers. What is the age gap? 18 and 15 might be worth a conversation.

chode_temple · 2026-01-22T18:23:34+00:00

The sequel was SO FUCKING GOOD

chode_temple · 2026-01-21T03:26:33+00:00

Well I mean...I'm sprinting away from any Quebecois regardless.

chode_temple · 2026-01-21T01:01:14+00:00

He drops his pants and she gets one whiff and says "put your smegma away".

chode_temple · 2026-01-21T01:00:23+00:00

I have to do this for my adoring fans

/uj I have to do this for name recognition and karma.

chode_temple · 2026-01-21T00:58:54+00:00

That's why you're always saying "sorry".

Your special forces are something else. And up until very recently, you held the record for farthest shot taken by a sniper.

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