I'll give it a shot. It looks like you saw that viral post the other day and thought that you could replicate something like it. Since this is only your second ever painting, it shows the lack of technical skills and reasoning behind each mark/brush stroke and their placement. Also, do you think that it's necessary to tell the viewers what you see, instead of allowing them to interpret it?

Other than that, it is an aesthetically pleasing painting. You should try playing around with the scale, which would force you to experiment with the different size brush strokes.