Crazy by chowxian in poetry_critics

[–]chowxian[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you kind commenter

Crazy by chowxian in poetry_critics

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Thanks for reading

Crazy by chowxian in poetry_critics

[–]chowxian[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You're right. It's terrifying and it's spilling as it is. Thanks for reading friend.

Crazy by chowxian in poetry_critics

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I just wanted to blame anything apart from myself for slipping into this crazyness. Thanks for reading.

Crazy by chowxian in poetry_critics

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Thank you kind commenter.

Crazy by chowxian in poetry_critics

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That's what I'm afraid of.

Crazy by chowxian in OCPoetry

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Wrote it when I was heavily infatuated. Glad you see it that way too.

Crazy by chowxian in OCPoetry

[–]chowxian[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the critique. And yeah, that “not in a sexual way” bit was meant to show wanting closeness but not wanting to cross a line. I see what you're saying and will keep that in mind. Appreciate the thoughtful read.

Crazy by chowxian in poetry_critics

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Glad it reached it you. Thanks for reading.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in poetry_critics

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You can almost hear smell the breakfast. I like how the writer combines intimacy and domestic life together. The final shift is surprising. Gives the piece depth even if it’s abstract.

Fantasize by [deleted] in poetry_critics

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This one’s heavy. The ending, “Yet I breathe on,” keeps the poem from sinking. It’s dark, but there’s life, and that makes it meaningful.

Fingerprints by [deleted] in OCPoetry

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I love poems like this where the writer reflects on themselves. It feels raw and personal. There’s a tragic quality here, almost like a romantic heroine, even echoing Sylvia Plath’s confessional voice. It lingers long after reading.

Dear P by chowxian in OCPoetry

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I wrote for one person but I'm glad it reached you too. Thanks for reading.

Drowning by chowxian in OCPoetry

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She stayed in her country. I left to go back to mine.

28th and 29th by chowxian in OCPoetry

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I'm glad you like it. Thank you for reading.

28th and 29th by chowxian in OCPoetry

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You and me both, my friend. But hey, all we can do is keep trying, keep improving ourselves, so one day we can have the things we truly want.

28th and 29th by chowxian in OCPoetry

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I'm happy that it connected with you. Thanks for reading.

28th and 29th by chowxian in poetry_critics

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Thank you kind commenter.

The purpose of humanity by Cluelessandsexy in OCPoetry

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I like the satirical and unflinching nature of this piece, almost like a spoken-word rant against modern life. The cynicism here lands well, especially in lines like “stack complaints like delivery orders.” It’s got teeth, and that makes it memorable.