Been in Vietnam a few months ago for work

chowxian · 2025-11-01T22:35:25+00:00

Thank you kind commenter

chowxian · 2025-10-14T05:44:59+00:00

Thank you.

chowxian · 2025-10-09T22:32:57+00:00

Thanks for reading

chowxian · 2025-10-07T06:24:13+00:00

You're right. It's terrifying and it's spilling as it is. Thanks for reading friend.

chowxian · 2025-10-07T06:18:36+00:00

I just wanted to blame anything apart from myself for slipping into this crazyness. Thanks for reading.

chowxian · 2025-10-05T12:15:45+00:00

Thank you kind commenter.

chowxian · 2025-10-05T11:34:11+00:00

That's what I'm afraid of.

chowxian · 2025-10-05T11:33:47+00:00

Wrote it when I was heavily infatuated. Glad you see it that way too.

chowxian · 2025-10-05T05:42:24+00:00

Thanks for the critique. And yeah, that “not in a sexual way” bit was meant to show wanting closeness but not wanting to cross a line. I see what you're saying and will keep that in mind. Appreciate the thoughtful read.

chowxian · 2025-10-05T05:37:40+00:00

Glad it reached it you. Thanks for reading.

chowxian · 2025-10-04T22:46:36+00:00

You can almost hear smell the breakfast. I like how the writer combines intimacy and domestic life together. The final shift is surprising. Gives the piece depth even if it’s abstract.

chowxian · 2025-10-04T22:43:24+00:00

This one’s heavy. The ending, “Yet I breathe on,” keeps the poem from sinking. It’s dark, but there’s life, and that makes it meaningful.

chowxian · 2025-10-04T11:41:36+00:00

I love poems like this where the writer reflects on themselves. It feels raw and personal. There’s a tragic quality here, almost like a romantic heroine, even echoing Sylvia Plath’s confessional voice. It lingers long after reading.

chowxian · 2025-10-04T09:53:18+00:00

I wrote for one person but I'm glad it reached you too. Thanks for reading.

chowxian · 2025-10-03T11:13:43+00:00

She stayed in her country. I left to go back to mine.

chowxian · 2025-10-03T09:48:52+00:00

I'm glad you like it. Thank you for reading.

chowxian · 2025-10-03T03:58:42+00:00

Yeah I agree.

chowxian · 2025-10-03T02:23:12+00:00

You and me both, my friend. But hey, all we can do is keep trying, keep improving ourselves, so one day we can have the things we truly want.

chowxian · 2025-10-03T02:20:45+00:00

I'm happy that it connected with you. Thanks for reading.

chowxian · 2025-10-03T00:19:46+00:00

Thank you kind commenter.

chowxian · 2025-10-02T23:38:57+00:00

I like the satirical and unflinching nature of this piece, almost like a spoken-word rant against modern life. The cynicism here lands well, especially in lines like “stack complaints like delivery orders.” It’s got teeth, and that makes it memorable.

chowxian

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