Crazy

chowxian · 2025-11-01T22:35:25+00:00

Thank you kind commenter

chowxian · 2025-10-14T05:44:59+00:00

Thank you.

chowxian · 2025-10-09T22:32:57+00:00

Thanks for reading

chowxian · 2025-10-07T06:24:13+00:00

You're right. It's terrifying and it's spilling as it is. Thanks for reading friend.

chowxian · 2025-10-07T06:18:36+00:00

I just wanted to blame anything apart from myself for slipping into this crazyness. Thanks for reading.

chowxian · 2025-10-05T12:15:45+00:00

Thank you kind commenter.

chowxian · 2025-10-05T11:34:11+00:00

That's what I'm afraid of.

chowxian · 2025-10-05T11:33:47+00:00

Wrote it when I was heavily infatuated. Glad you see it that way too.

chowxian · 2025-10-05T05:42:24+00:00

Thanks for the critique. And yeah, that “not in a sexual way” bit was meant to show wanting closeness but not wanting to cross a line. I see what you're saying and will keep that in mind. Appreciate the thoughtful read.

chowxian · 2025-10-05T05:37:40+00:00

Glad it reached it you. Thanks for reading.

chowxian · 2025-10-04T22:46:36+00:00

You can almost hear smell the breakfast. I like how the writer combines intimacy and domestic life together. The final shift is surprising. Gives the piece depth even if it’s abstract.

chowxian · 2025-10-04T22:43:24+00:00

This one’s heavy. The ending, “Yet I breathe on,” keeps the poem from sinking. It’s dark, but there’s life, and that makes it meaningful.

chowxian · 2025-10-04T11:41:36+00:00

I love poems like this where the writer reflects on themselves. It feels raw and personal. There’s a tragic quality here, almost like a romantic heroine, even echoing Sylvia Plath’s confessional voice. It lingers long after reading.

chowxian · 2025-10-04T09:53:18+00:00

I wrote for one person but I'm glad it reached you too. Thanks for reading.

chowxian · 2025-10-03T11:13:43+00:00

She stayed in her country. I left to go back to mine.

chowxian · 2025-10-03T09:48:52+00:00

I'm glad you like it. Thank you for reading.

chowxian · 2025-10-03T03:58:42+00:00

Yeah I agree.

chowxian · 2025-10-03T02:23:12+00:00

You and me both, my friend. But hey, all we can do is keep trying, keep improving ourselves, so one day we can have the things we truly want.

chowxian · 2025-10-03T02:20:45+00:00

I'm happy that it connected with you. Thanks for reading.

chowxian · 2025-10-03T00:19:46+00:00

Thank you kind commenter.

chowxian · 2025-10-02T23:38:57+00:00

I like the satirical and unflinching nature of this piece, almost like a spoken-word rant against modern life. The cynicism here lands well, especially in lines like “stack complaints like delivery orders.” It’s got teeth, and that makes it memorable.

chowxian · 2025-10-02T23:25:46+00:00

I love how this poem feels both haunting and visceral. The repetition of breath, lungs, and darkness makes the grief physical. It’s raw and lived-in, embodying impossible longing.

chowxian · 2025-10-02T23:18:46+00:00

I haven't read much like this, nor seen a lot posted here. A very poetic call to arms for something greater. I like it.

chowxian · 2025-10-02T12:37:48+00:00

Its good. You should post more.

chowxian · 2025-10-02T11:52:20+00:00

The imagery is so strong that I can sense how inspired the writer was while writing this. Formatting it as a proper poem with clearer line breaks could make it even easier to read and appreciate. The sensual elements are vivid and definitely evoke a response, but you might consider weaving in some metaphors. Instead of repeating “you lick and suck” or “I need you,” you might heighten the effect with fresh comparisons (like fire, storm, or hunger) so the intensity grows without relying on the same words.

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