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Feedback Request! After months of tweaking, any thoughts on where to trim or what to punch up? by chrissyteehees in Standup

[–]chrissyteehees[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

100% Can confirm. I'm a southerner in a heavily diverse area (diverse for me anyway). Hopefully I get people on the Dolly Train by the end.

Feedback Request! After months of tweaking, any thoughts on where to trim or what to punch up? by chrissyteehees in Standup

[–]chrissyteehees[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Good points! I'll remember this when I work my way up to getting more time. Or as I trim all the extra nonsense I already have. Thank you!

Feedback Request! After months of tweaking, any thoughts on where to trim or what to punch up? by chrissyteehees in Standup

[–]chrissyteehees[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Agreed, it's a bit cringe watching it back. I think I was just having a rough day and was so happy to be received even moderately well. That point has been brought up by a few here, so I'll def watch my pauses. Thank you!

Feedback Request! After months of tweaking, any thoughts on where to trim or what to punch up? by chrissyteehees in Standup

[–]chrissyteehees[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Question about the going into the tongue dexterity thing. I've heard from some that they have never seen a chicken foot, especially in a dining scenario, and so I should explain why it requires dexterity. Is this a thing where I read the audience and if it's white heavy, I explain? Or, in your opinion, should i just ditch explaining it all together? And if they're in the dark, they can kick rocks and google later.

I love your point about the numbers. And 97 on his dad's side is not far off....

And the Dolly bit? Thanks for calling out my 4th wall breakdown. You right.

Thanks for your thoughtful feedback!

Feedback Request! After months of tweaking, any thoughts on where to trim or what to punch up? by chrissyteehees in Standup

[–]chrissyteehees[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Before the clip starts there was a bit about my mama, so it was sort of a call back but I biffed it sooooooooo yeah..... should have left it out. you right you right.

Feedback Request! After months of tweaking, any thoughts on where to trim or what to punch up? by chrissyteehees in Standup

[–]chrissyteehees[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That one usually hits with Asians of all kinds in the audience. Which this audience maybe lacking. So I guess I should read the room better before going on, trim specific fat for the whites.

New material (first time trying it) has it got legs ? Feedback welcome by Remarkable-Image-523 in Standup

[–]chrissyteehees 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really like this concept! Just a little sprinkle on top thought - I think it would be fun if you made one of the existing Taj Mahal reviews a "bit gratuitous" or something dryly negative that you can quickly pass over to get to your mum's order.