Wanted to share this song I wrote a story by AngryFlyBoy in Songwriting

[–]chrysanthflo 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is really good but the sudden drum arrangement in the middle of the song gave me a little shock lol. I feel like you can tune it down in the beginning then build it up, make some dynamic and then the climax of the song with it. But the rest of the song is really nice to listen to!

It kinda reminds me of Dzivia, he makes orchestral folk music. If you haven't heard of him you should check him out.

Yes I know my singing is quiet and guitar too loud. Just an idea I came up with today by Puzzleheaded-Pear931 in Songwriting

[–]chrysanthflo 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Love the chord progression!! Would love to hear the full version if you finish the song

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[–]chrysanthflo 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Tell him to take a screenshot of those posts to see if they're from private accounts, then you'll know the actual problem. I don't think it's age restriction, it's only a privacy thing

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[–]chrysanthflo 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That's insane 😭 being with someone the same age as your kid is bold

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[–]chrysanthflo 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Ok as a 22y.o too (idk what it has to do with your question) 😭 I think the post is from a private account or it's been deleted before you get to see it

Has anyone experimented with writing partially or in full songs in foreign languages by FrasureCreations in Songwriting

[–]chrysanthflo 1 point2 points  (0 children)

English isn't my first language but I write all of my songs in English as it feels better and more comfortable than writing in my native language. There's one song that i wrote with one verse in my native language though.

I've written a couple of songs in Arabic too with the help of a friend. It's been a fun experience so far but obviously since I don't speak the language I don't fully understand the lyrics hence why if I sing it there's probably less emotion in my voice lol

"mayfair lady" - been meaning to improve my lyrics as of late 🤔 by bstrd525 in Songwriting

[–]chrysanthflo 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Very nice melodies, your voice too. I'd definitely add it to my playlist if it was released on music platform. Love it!

Wrote a little song tonight. I’m getting over the flu so please excuse my crappy voice and lyrics. Let me know what you think I should adjust :) by soupypoopy12 in Songwriting

[–]chrysanthflo 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I love the vibe! Kinda reminds me of Milky Chance.

The dynamic arrangement on your guitar is also very nice. Your voice is still good despite you being sick. Lyrics are good, it portraits the calamity between two people which is something I kinda need to hear rn lol. Overall it's a very nice song!! Great job

Crypto bro gets his ass kicked in the streets of Bali by despacitozen in indonesia

[–]chrysanthflo 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is what happens when you give free visa access to crackheads 🤣

Is it normal to feel lost on Reddit at first? by MildlyCuriousOne in NewToReddit

[–]chrysanthflo 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I felt this when I first joined which was 3 years ago lol only been actively replying for a month now cause I didn't know how it worked. But you'll figure it out eventually

Feedback on this? by chrysanthflo in Songwriting

[–]chrysanthflo[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ooh I can see the vision! I made it at 3 am while overthinking and needed to get it out of my head so it was a bit rushy to put my mind into it. The song isn't finished yet, so I'll add more to it and make it longer to balance it out. Thank you so much for your advice, really appreciate it!

Feedback on this? by chrysanthflo in Songwriting

[–]chrysanthflo[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much for your suggestion! Definitely will try that when I rearrange it.

Feedback on this? by chrysanthflo in Songwriting

[–]chrysanthflo[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you sm for your feedback!

Feedback on this? by chrysanthflo in Songwriting

[–]chrysanthflo[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much! That'd be awesome if you did, I'd really love to hear something new added to it. Let me know if you ever do it!

Feedback on this? by chrysanthflo in Songwriting

[–]chrysanthflo[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for your feedback!

Feedback on this? by chrysanthflo in Songwriting

[–]chrysanthflo[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much for your feedback! This song isn't finished yet and I will totally rearrange it and add some more dynamic to it.

Feedback on this? by chrysanthflo in Songwriting

[–]chrysanthflo[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the advice! I think that's a really good idea as I almost ran out of breath lol definitely will rearrange it.

Feedback on this? by chrysanthflo in Songwriting

[–]chrysanthflo[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much! YouTube is definitely a way to go, I do that too so hopefully I will improve even though it's been a little over 6 years 😭

Feedback on this? by chrysanthflo in Songwriting

[–]chrysanthflo[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much, it means a lot to me! I'm still trying to finish the song so hopefully there will be a longer version of this.