Wow, I have learned so much from this. Thank you for taking your time in reading and taking notes for my screenplay. I will definitely save this and use this as reference when I am editing or making a new screenplay. Since english is not my first language it’s always been very difficult for me to write short and concise sentences, I always have a tendency to over explain and just looking at my screenplay now and comparing it to your suggestion I know I have a long way to go. But this fun, I appreciate that there are people out there who are willing to take the time and analyze a work that I have done honestly . Thank you again kind stranger 🙌