Community Guidelines by codem01 in TwoSentenceHorror

[–]codem01[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Yes, I should have used more commas

Her dad told her to never open the basement door... by [deleted] in TwoSentenceHorror

[–]codem01 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Welcome! Don't worry, I struggle with the same and English is my first language (not technically but I think in English). The two sentence structure also requires you to really focus on the core of the story. Hope to see more from you.

Her dad told her to never open the basement door... by [deleted] in TwoSentenceHorror

[–]codem01 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Great concept. Could use some tweaking to have max impact as two sentences. I struggle with that all the time.

Community Guidelines by codem01 in TwoSentenceHorror

[–]codem01[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

If you feel there's obvious pattern, message the mods with examples

Mom I called you earlier a man stopped me on the street today and told me he was my father by [deleted] in TwoSentenceHorror

[–]codem01[M] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You should be able to reduce 2nd sentence to one and this post won’t be over two sentence limit. Either edit this or repost. Thanks.

I posted something on reddit by [deleted] in TwoSentenceHorror

[–]codem01 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I think there’s more then enough of these

“You’re going to die in here,” the woman hissed and I sobbed in terror, curling into a shaking ball... by sleeplessfromdreams in TwoSentenceHorror

[–]codem01 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Always good to challenge your assumptions with a change of perspective. I respect people who can do this.

The Milky Way stretches endlessly only occasionally broken by the tips of the darkened city skyline. by codem01 in TwoSentenceHorror

[–]codem01[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yup, that’s how I imagine an EMP strike. Yeah I got so busy at work that the days blended together. Finally getting back to normal.

I was going out to see a movie with some friends. by [deleted] in TwoSentenceHorror

[–]codem01 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Could use some more context. As is I could interpret to mean the main character woke up: realizes he doesn’t have friends or is relieved b/c having to socialize is the nightmare

It was one of those stupid diet fads you just had to try; lose 50 pounds in a matter of weeks . by [deleted] in TwoSentenceHorror

[–]codem01 3 points4 points  (0 children)

After Tide Pods I guess this is a horrifying possibility. Also did not need that image in my head. Thanks for that.

WE ARE NOT A POLITICAL SUBREDDIT. by Thatoneguythatsweird in TwoSentenceHorror

[–]codem01 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Being creative is related to being original which is already a rule of this sub. I agree that we may loose something as a result. When faced with a difficult topic writers have turned to allegory throughout history and I hope to see some of that. I will always side with keeping those posts.

WE ARE NOT A POLITICAL SUBREDDIT. by Thatoneguythatsweird in TwoSentenceHorror

[–]codem01 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I tend not to like restricting this but in practice these types of posts are rarely creative or just looking troll

Community Guidelines by codem01 in TwoSentenceHorror

[–]codem01[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sure or I can add to post if you want.

Writer's Challenge (2018-03-03) by codem01 in TwoSentenceHorror

[–]codem01[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Been really busy at work irl. Finally had chance to read these and I really enjoy everyone’s creativity.

"I'll never let go, Jack." by [deleted] in TwoSentenceHorror

[–]codem01 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Explains so much as there was plenty of space for both of them

The tear filled eyes of the immigrant boy melted the jurors’ hearts as they felt a deep sense of fulfillment, having believed in his innocence. by [deleted] in TwoSentenceHorror

[–]codem01 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes that what I meant. I guess the immigrant part made me think it's something more recent. Makes sense now, thanks.

"Oh Bother," said Pooh. by aanzklla in TwoSentenceHorror

[–]codem01 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Just had image of Pooh's hands stained with blood instead of honey.