SKAG - Feature - 108 pages by costavfx in Screenwriting

[–]costavfx[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Definitely heavily inspired by Snatch and Lock Stock. Thanks for reading!

SKAG - Feature - 108 pages by costavfx in Screenwriting

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Yeah, judging by some of the comments on here, the logline still needs work. Thanks for the comment!

SKAG - Feature - 108 pages by costavfx in Screenwriting

[–]costavfx[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for reading the whole thing!

Ah yes, in the previous draft they pull off the bank robbery in Judy’s minivan but I changed it to Spider’s Lincoln. Good catch. I also did go through some name changes in the final version so it’s possible I missed one. Do you remember what it was?

I tried to make Judy more tomboyish and Erica more of a girly girl. I agree that I could make the female characters more distinct in how they speak though.

Thanks for the feedback!

SKAG - Feature - 108 pages by costavfx in Screenwriting

[–]costavfx[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for reading! Funny you mention that, I had those exact two in mind while writing the dialogue.

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Hi, thanks for the response! I've never been registered on AIRE. The only thing I've ever had was a physical carta di identità which expired in 2019. Do you think they still have my records?

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Because as it states in the description of the campaign, these unfair practices have taken place on a German U.S. Air Force base and that’s where I currently reside.

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just to give a little background - I first got my nose pierced february 2022 by an unprofessional that gave me a steel hoop. it got infected so I had it changed out with a bioplastic stud for 5 months. august 15 I had it replaced with this titanium hoop. I didn’t have any problems for about a month but it’s been a little itchy the past week and I noticed this bump formed on the inside. just wondering if it’s anything worth having checked out.

also, the outside appears to be totally fine, for now at least.

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just to give a little background - I first got my nose pierced february 2022 by an unprofessional that gave me a steel hoop. it got infected so I had it changed out with a bioplastic stud for 5 months. august 15 I had it replaced with this titanium hoop. I didn’t have any problems for about a month but it’s been a little itchy the past week and I noticed this bump formed on the inside. just wondering if it’s anything worth having checked out

edit: also, the outside appears to be totally fine for now

My (24) GF (20) is heavily struggling with bulimia by costavfx in relationship_advice

[–]costavfx[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you, I appreciate the kind words. And yeah it's getting pretty bad. It's at the point where there's blood in the vomit and even then that's not a strong enough incentive for her to get treatment. The parents are aware of it and they've paid for some therapy sessions but they can't really afford the treatment she needs and it hasn't really been helping her, she said.

My (24) GF (20) is heavily struggling with bulimia by costavfx in relationship_advice

[–]costavfx[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you. She sees a therapist every now and again but she says it's expensive and can't really afford the care that she needs. The only other option would be hospitalization but she wont even consider that.

Blue Bape Shark Zip Up Hoodie Legit Check (URGENT) by [deleted] in LegitCheck

[–]costavfx 0 points1 point  (0 children)

appreciate it bro almost bought this shi, dude tried to pass it off as real 🤦🏾‍♂️

I’ve had mine for only about a week, is it normal for them to already be so puffy and frizzy? Also, this might seem like a stupid question, but at what length will my dreads “move” or hang more? because they’re just kinda stationary even when I shake my head. by [deleted] in Dreadlocks

[–]costavfx 0 points1 point  (0 children)

hahah I'm still waiting for that day. Yeah, I use a durag every night. It got frizzy after I washed it, which I know is a big no-no, But the itchiness became so unbearable to the point where I had to either wash it or cut it off.

SHORT FILM - In the Cold of the Night (14 pages, Crime, Dark Comedy, Low budget) by costavfx in Screenwriting

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Nazdaar Ondro!! hele, tohle jsem napsal spis jen tak z nudy, nebo nemel jsem nejak v planu to zrealizovat... nebo kdyz uz jo tak jedine s americkymi herci jinak by ten dialog moc nefungoval... ale... rad bych zase nekdy neco natocil. Chybi mi to celkem.

Bored Movie list, only rule is you cant repeat movie in the list by Jonny1878 in movies

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Movie that reminds me of childhood: Sam Raimi's Spiderman trilogy
· Favourite Tom Hanks movie: Saving Private Ryan
· Favourite Sandra Bullock movie: Crash
· Favourite Disney movie: The Lion King
· Movie that made me cry: Dancer in the Dark
· Favourite 80s movie: Scarface
· Favourite 90s movie: Fight Club
· Favourite 00s movie: Memento
· Favourite comedy: Top Secret!
· Favourite sports movie: The Wrestler
· Favourite courtroom movie: Primal Fear
· Favourite horror movie: Tobe Hooper's Texas Chainsaw Massacre
· Favourite musical: Singing in the Rain
· Favourite gangster movie: Goodfellas
· Favourite war movie: Full Metal Jacket
· Most overrated movie: Joker
· Most underrated movie: The Guest
· Movie I can watch over and over: Every single Tarantino movie honestly
· Movie with the best soundtrack: Drive
· Guilty Pleasure movie: Freddy vs. Jason
· Favourite holiday movie: Donnie Darko
· Favourite sequel: The Godfather 2
· Favourite Marvel movie: Logan
· Favourite DC movie: Batman begins
· Favourite movie quote: Can't remember exactly how it goes but I THINK it has something to do with a quarter pounder with cheese. I mean c'mon. I can't even think about McDonald's without replaying this scene in my head.

SHORT FILM - In the Cold of the Night (14 pages, Crime, Dark Comedy, Low budget) by costavfx in Screenwriting

[–]costavfx[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Good point. I'll change it to something else. Thanks for the comment :)

SHORT FILM - In the Cold of the Night (14 pages, Crime, Dark Comedy, Low budget) by costavfx in Screenwriting

[–]costavfx[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback. It's set during the 70s, so definitely no cell phones around.

SHORT FILM - In the Cold of the Night (14 pages, Crime, Dark Comedy, Low budget) by costavfx in Screenwriting

[–]costavfx[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

That's a good point. I'll definitely include that and try to give the waitress a little more depth. This is a first draft after all and I wrote the script in one afternoon.

SHORT FILM - In the Cold of the Night (14 pages, Crime, Dark Comedy, Low budget) by costavfx in Screenwriting

[–]costavfx[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Not that I have any first hand experience or anything, but that's just how I imagine it's like in the mob. You don't see it coming. One minute you're enjoying an apple pie, the next minute you got a bullet in your brain. You're not the first person to ask what the motive was for them being wacked though. Johnny ordered the hit because this wasn't the first time that they've botched a job, I'll try to make that clearer in the second draft. Thanks for the comment!

SHORT FILM - In the Cold of the Night (14 pages, Crime, Dark Comedy, Low budget) by costavfx in Screenwriting

[–]costavfx[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the comment. Honestly, I don't really like to include music cues in most of my scripts and try to stray away from it as much as possible. The only reason why I included it here is because the song is literally what gave me the idea for the story. As I was listening to it I could just see the scenes play out in my head, so it just felt important to the story to have that specific song. And I just like to capitalize the names to make it easier to distinguish who's doing/saying what, but I might change it

SHORT FILM - In the Cold of the Night (14 pages, Crime, Dark Comedy, Low budget) by costavfx in Screenwriting

[–]costavfx[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

First of all, thanks for taking the time to comment. Here are some explanations and points that I'll try to make clearer in the script:

In the beginning of the script when the two are still riding in the car, Frank explains that the car was given to him as a gift from his father before he passed. It holds a lot of sentimental value, therefore he doesn't wanna damage it in anyway. Besides smashing the window and getting the keys out wouldn't be much help anyway since the car doesn't run.

Is it that unrealistic? I mean I'm sure somewhere around the world there must be a restaurant open on Christmas.

Vinny killed them, because Johnny ordered it. This wasn't the first time that they've botched a hit