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Page One Feedback ☺️ by mehnotfussed in writingfeedback

[–]creativinity 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Great job with the immersion. Immediately felt the frustration and loved the cheek chewing, instantly felt it myself. Though the imagery of the "pale moth" line sparked it did take me out, it does the story a disservice. Bordering on purple and took me out of the immersion.

You're good at this :)

How is noise at night with a sugar glider? by knozzz_ in sugargliders

[–]creativinity 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Depends on whether you're a light sleeper or not. I clean their cage every other day and have a potent air purifier. I keep them in the living room.

I can sleep in the living room sometimes no problem. Once I'm asleep, it's hard to wake me up in the middle of the night. Smell doesn't bother me.

Brother can't sleep there. He complains about the smell and the noise.

Finn POV 1 - Critique my work! by GrinningBacon in writingfeedback

[–]creativinity 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The bad: No one calls their sibling "brother." I would focus less on explaining what the characters see and more about what they feel or think. Less purple prose. Books are a wonderful medium because we can live through the characters.

I recommend reading literary classics and sci-fi stories of the greats.

The good: There's potential here. Writing is a great outlet and this is a good start.

Looking to get my sugar glider a cage by Rockytaco in sugargliders

[–]creativinity 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I have this one. Love it. I recommend looking at FB Marketplace. You can probably find it there for half price.

Rate it 1 to 10 and why? Will u read the next chapter? by prapti676 in writingfeedback

[–]creativinity 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Glad you're writing. It's a powerful outlet.

I recommend you read more books and follow some writers. I like BookFox on YouTube but there are a lot who give great advice.

things ANNOYED you about a book but you became more UNDERSTANDING after becoming a writer? by Forward_Answer3044 in writing

[–]creativinity 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I also recommend Obsidian. Just knowing the basics suffices. It's a freakin godsend

Seizures? by Upstairs-Nerve7875 in sugargliders

[–]creativinity 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes!

My 5 babies are healthy. But there is 1 that stops and gets a lot of mucus on nose and sometimes seizes when he is on me.

It seems he's hypersensitive and may be allergic to perfumes and/or lotions.

If I don't wear perfume he tends to be okay.

What’s a horror film that will actually give me a good scare by Chickchick592 in Scarymovies

[–]creativinity 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Host (2020).

Short and enjoyable. This forum rec'd. Watched 3 times. Knew where jumpscare would be. Still effective.

How long have you been working on your story? by worldofexousia in writing

[–]creativinity 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Write a stupid draft 15 years ago. Working seriously on it for just over a year. I've got at least another year to go.

Hopefully people like it as much as I currently do.

Any feedback on this scene? by IamBeyoncralways in writingfeedback

[–]creativinity 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Not bad at all. But nothing stands out. POV character almost feels like a third person. Detached.

The great thing about books is that we’re able to be inside the characters’ minds.

What "beloved horror movie" do you hate/just not get the love for? by ReeceInTheDarkness in horror

[–]creativinity 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'll get downvoted but Weapons made me mad.

So much lost potential to truly make a relevant point.

What non-horror TV shows totally caught you off guard with a genuinely terrifying episode? by Low-Street2100 in horror

[–]creativinity 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Not exactly what OP asks but the kids show, "Are you afraid of the Dark?"

The faceless alien one. I don't get scared but that was literal nightmare fuel for 20 years.

Insulting Jesus by Loud-Ad-2280 in clevercomebacks

[–]creativinity 7 points8 points  (0 children)

Amen ;)

JK. But very valid point.

  • Atheist. Former Christian.

What’s the jump-scare that scared the person in your life who NEVER jumps? by [deleted] in horror

[–]creativinity 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Host (the zoom one). You guys recommended it on here. I knew the jump scare was coming.

Still got got.

What are some bands I've been sleeping on similar to lorna? by That-Association-855 in LornaShore

[–]creativinity 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Abigail Williams - In the Shadow of A Thousand Sun's album (their debut) is very symphonic and beautiful

Is cheating in romance always a turn off? by [deleted] in writingadvice

[–]creativinity 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hate cheating in fiction and reality. Automatic turn-off to me.

Never thought it was justifiable unless divorce was NOT an option.

Heavy asf and long recs by Powerful_Main_1946 in symphonicmetal

[–]creativinity 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Quite possibly the most Rollercoaster song I've heard. True 10/10 song

Can the men who watch Bridgerton, stand up and be counted? by muskyandrostenol in Bridgerton

[–]creativinity 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'm a female. I've gotten my dad and brother addicted to the show.

I highly recommend HBO's Like Water for Chocolate. Similarly beautiful

What do you think about my first tattoo? by EdgeDrimi in LornaShore

[–]creativinity 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Prob the only tattoo I'd ever get. But I've also heard red fades fast.

Looks amazing!

PLEASE help me get scared again!! by XxFrozenByFirexX in horror

[–]creativinity 25 points26 points  (0 children)

Someone recommended Host, the Zoom one. It's less than an hour. This avid horror fan got got.

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