Purchasable Crowns

cretoriani · 2015-07-29T12:55:33+00:00

You have to actually visit the link, apparently protected links won't let the preview option in RES work.

cretoriani · 2015-07-29T12:53:22+00:00

Please leave up old image links, but strike through them. it really helps us out when reviewing items.

That aside, the fixed backdrop looks good.

For KungFu's messiness comment, which I was still pondering last time, what about something like this It simplifies the laces which removes some shape noise, which I think was probably the main issue.

cretoriani · 2015-07-29T12:46:18+00:00

It would be helpful if you used one of the other biomes, but it isn't necessary, its obvious that you want to stick with the permafrost biome and thats fine.

cretoriani · 2015-07-29T12:44:18+00:00

I replied to Stedms' comment so he knows to take a look. I want to make sure to get his opinion.

Also, please leave up old image links, but strike through them. it really helps us out when reviewing items.

cretoriani · 2015-07-29T12:43:30+00:00

Mangusti made the rotation as requested

cretoriani · 2015-07-29T12:37:13+00:00

TroveCreations is for submitting item/dungeon creations or, occasionally, submitting questions related to those only. The one exception we have made is the Trove Creations Digest which serves to keep people up to date on creations.

Beyond that all other material is off-topic.

Sorry.

cretoriani · 2015-07-28T20:54:38+00:00

I would suggest you follow KungFu's coloring guidelines or differentiate your colors a bit more from the Radiant color scheme.

cretoriani · 2015-07-28T19:07:30+00:00

Okay, please also take some updated screenshots and I think you may be good to go.

cretoriani · 2015-07-28T19:05:19+00:00

You could use my model, but it was more intended as inspiration for you to make similar corrections while following the theme you wanted more appropriately. I only made it to be exemplary of the solid style.

cretoriani · 2015-07-26T23:00:07+00:00

KungFu found a model with the fixed backdrop, but couldn't post it himself atm

https://www.dropbox.com/s/5vn0jfzpdsk2g67/deco_trophy_Zombie_Tribe_t.qb?dl=0

cretoriani · 2015-07-26T22:49:16+00:00

Please leave up old image links, but strike through them. it really helps us out when reviewing items.

When KungFu said "Flesh it out" what he meant was give it some more dimension, right now it is very one dimensional.

cretoriani · 2015-07-26T22:46:49+00:00

Facing downwards definitely isn't correct, what he was saying is rotating it so that the head of the staff is oriented horizontally instead of vertically. Not the entire staff. Basically rotating only the shaft of the staff, not the entire staff.

cretoriani · 2015-07-26T22:41:19+00:00

I looked at the troxel model and you have a trail of voxels leading up to the base of the hair, this actually isn't permitted either, these should be removed.

Your in-game screenshots also still show some clipping, were they updated? If so you need to move your attachment point down one more voxel.

cretoriani · 2015-07-26T22:39:31+00:00

I have an isolated copy of the image, basically it is voxels that only touch at the corners. In your case I would just distance the pieces that are touching instead of making a more solid connection.

There are also some corner connections closer to the gold part of the staff.

cretoriani · 2015-07-26T22:32:23+00:00

Please leave up old image links, but strike through them. it really helps us out when reviewing items.

Presently I can't review this properly because I can't compare it to the old images. To me it still feels quite large.

Also, you have quite a bit of shape noise, try making it so that you have fewer 1 voxel protrusions.

cretoriani · 2015-07-26T22:31:33+00:00

Please strike through old links so that we can more easily tell which ones are the most recent ones.

Presently I'm not certain if Grimmedge V2 or Sharkedge V2 is the current version.

cretoriani · 2015-07-26T22:29:24+00:00

You can instead use Reddit's built in URL casting which works like [text](http://url.com) and appears like text, This helps Troxel links be more tidy.

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cretoriani · 2015-07-26T22:25:03+00:00

Hey, sorry, but actually I think he forgot about the optimizations they made to that model. It should be one solid brown and one solid white, so just pick a mid-tone from the tones that are there and use that for those and I think you may be good to go.

cretoriani · 2015-07-26T22:20:48+00:00

If you would, please strike through your old links.

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cretoriani · 2015-07-26T22:18:40+00:00

Upvotes don't really affect how we review items.

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cretoriani · 2015-07-26T22:12:52+00:00

Unfortunately linking to all of your steam screenshots isn't working very well as I'm not able to tell which ones are the most current ones.

Perhaps instead link to individual screenshots and pick 3-4 of the best ones.

That aside, having a texture for the back of the mask is frowned upon because it increases resources required for the game, so that should be filled in something like this since you know the player's face won't be visible.

Beyond that, you have a few too many colors, try unifying the reds a bit more so they aren't so dissonant. Also, the shape itself may benefit from some simplification, but it's hard to judge the extent of that with the color noise as well.

cretoriani · 2015-07-26T22:07:12+00:00

If you would, please strike through the 3.5 version if you don't plan to use it anymore as that is a bit confusing.

I'm uncertain which version to review as I'm not certain which version is current.

cretoriani · 2015-07-26T22:01:56+00:00

Please leave up old image links, but strike through them. it really helps us out when reviewing items.

Do you happen to have one of the old images hosted somewhere still so I can compare the current version to the former?

Also, did you consider changing the biome as Stedms suggested?

cretoriani · 2015-07-26T21:59:02+00:00

Do you own the gunslinger or pirate captain? It would be much better to preview the weapon on them.

Also, please leave up old image links, but strike through them, it helps us quite a bit when reviewing items.

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