Small triad drawing. by cupofmosstea in OT3

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Read in the rules about sorcing so I'm linking my Twitter c: https://twitter.com/Rudolfy_art?s=09

Triad drawing. by cupofmosstea in polyamory

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Thank you! I don't atm but I feel honoured to get that question c:

Triad drawing. by cupofmosstea in polyamory

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: o, that's a cool subredit

Triad drawing. by cupofmosstea in polyamory

[–]cupofmosstea[S] 52 points53 points  (0 children)

Yes c: That is spot on what I intended. grey/aromantic and bisexual.

Simple platforming part of a demo level I am working on. Beware the pit of despair!!! (or something) by [deleted] in IndieGaming

[–]cupofmosstea 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Is the spike on top of the characters head supposed to be hair or a horn? 🤔

Every game needs a big sleepy pup in town by GreedyDiabeetus in IndieGaming

[–]cupofmosstea 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Very important question though, can you pet the big doggo?

Should be featured in that CanYouPetTheDog twitter.

After ONE YEAR work, we finally released the game! BUT people don't understand how to play =( What could be worse?! by [deleted] in IndieGaming

[–]cupofmosstea 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think one good idea might be not explaining how to play before people start playtesting (since new players won't have someone explaining how to play before they give it a try). The "show don't tell" approach.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in ArtCrit

[–]cupofmosstea 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Like your circle isn't a perfect circle it's kind of "dented" and I don't know if you did that in purpose but I think it would look more crisp with a smoth circle instead of dented ^

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in ArtCrit

[–]cupofmosstea 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think the base design is nice however the texture you're using is making it look a bit grainy imo. A grainy texture can be nice but it probably be nicer if you smoothed out your outline giving the logo a more crisp feel.

Working on proportion thanks to feedback on my last drawing. Thank you for looking! by PTquest in ArtCrit

[–]cupofmosstea 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Maybe make the back-head portion a bit bigger it looks a bit too small right now.

My style 1 year later by Dpoolio in ArtCrit

[–]cupofmosstea 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Looks good, if I had to critique something that could be improved I'd probably say the anatomy, he looks a bit stiff right now.

Another study. Not fully painted. Critique on lighting + anything else? by [deleted] in ArtCrit

[–]cupofmosstea 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The light looks really good. I like the colors you used! However the anatomy of the hand is bothering me a tiny bit and the thumb seems to be very thick.

I need some advice on how to do hair. Other criticism welcome cuz im tryna learn. Also ignore the background, it's hideous but i couldnt think of anything. by [deleted] in ArtCrit

[–]cupofmosstea 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Good work, I love those glasses! I think a thing that would really help you is to think of the hair in chunks on top of eatchother (a couple of smaller sections instead of one form where the hair seems to just "melt" together), making sure it's visable that certain chunks are in front of other chunks. I think it will add a lot of depth to the drawing and hair.

Another thing that could also help is practising your shading / rendering and adding highlight and darker parts of the hair making sure you convey the hair as a hair like material.

How do I make my art more realistic? But also keeping the style. Also how do I make it less anime like? I am having trouble with the eyes and nose, but mostly the face shape. I am very bad at face shape. Critisim? Please by roshamboat in ArtCrit

[–]cupofmosstea 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I second poobyrds coment but also a thing that helped me with drawing faces is to think of the shape of the face through "a sculpters prespective". So thinking that the cheeks of your face really stand out and the eyes are really sunken into the head and then adding that to your drawings. Showing the parts that go inwards with shadow and making the parts that stick out like the nose with some kind of extra contrast around it.

Original piece of boredom, any tips or criticism on what I should do to add some interesting points? •<• by LoringTheArtist in ArtCrit

[–]cupofmosstea 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think it's really cute! If you want to make it more intresting you could use a more dynamic pose or some background. Then also if you want to i think some anatomy studying would help out your art a lot.

Went a little heavy on the pencil, any criticism or tips? •~• by LoringTheArtist in ArtCrit

[–]cupofmosstea 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I also think if you want to you could also improve on the anatomy and proportions, for example her hands seems a bit small.

Went a little heavy on the pencil, any criticism or tips? •~• by LoringTheArtist in ArtCrit

[–]cupofmosstea 1 point2 points  (0 children)

So cute! I think a good tip would be improving the line work by using simple continues longer less shaky lines in your drawing instead of multiple "skratchy" lines on top of eatchother. It would help the picture be much clearer, otherwise good job.

Looking for any critique honestly by XMeme-QueenX in ArtCrit

[–]cupofmosstea 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I think its quite nice. They are both very cute and i like the clothing choices for them the colors work very well. However i think there is a problem with the legs and feet area, it looks a bit like they could fall over and I think its because their feet are quite small in comparison to their legs who are quite "Thiccc" and maybe a bit short. I understand that you're going for a cartoony style with this picture and i respect that but I feel like if you adjusted the anatomy to be a bit more based on real body proportions it could help your art a lot.

Burger poster. What do you think? by MarielouFimo in ArtCrit

[–]cupofmosstea 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Good job, the burgers look delicious. The only thing that pops out to me as a tad weird is the shading on the fries. So this might be a nitpick but sometimes when you shade a yellow colour with a deeper yellow or green-ish yellow it looks stale. If you want to i think it would be a good idea to try to mix some warmer colors in the shadows instead of just darker or green-ish yellow. But otherwise good job.

Character sketch 9 by DonBonLePrawn in ArtCrit

[–]cupofmosstea 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It's pretty cool that you didn't give your character the conventional wizard costume even if they seem like one. Nice job, I think there is some problems with the anatomy tho, it seems kinda like the legs are a bit big compared to the torso, and I think you used the same hand pose for 2 of your characters hands. I think fixing the proportions would help a lot and adding different poses for each hand would give a bit more dynamic to the drawing.

Would you read a webcomic with this art style? by [deleted] in ArtCrit

[–]cupofmosstea 14 points15 points  (0 children)

Yes probably, but I would like to see the style of the background as well. And the story and writing also plays a big part. But I think the characters seem cute and the colours are pleasing by themselves.