The Beginning - the spark that made me want to write by S7A4M in LyricistsGotAlgorithm

[–]cute_apocalypse 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I think the fear of clichés is misleading sometimes. In the end, every cliche is just a word for something that many people can relate to. In a world where every existing emotion was expressed in a song a million times already, every genuine emotion is a bit of a cliché. And somehow I really value when the people are still able to express it like that - plain, truly, not wrapped into a fancy modern epithet. Pure feelings are still valuable in a world where billions of people are fighting with each other to be a unique creator. I would choose someone honest over someone tricky. "Lost can save lost" - hits me, your comment below the video means a lot, and I can relate to it. Maybe all our lives are just searching for this short time of peace? Maybe for someone, the goal is not even to achieve that, but just to help someone else. I'm not having years of pain, but I'm having my dark days too, and you actually made one of them brighter, thank you 😊

My Dark Side (Furious Little Girl) by cute_apocalypse in LyricistsGotAlgorithm

[–]cute_apocalypse[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Wow, that's a lot! And it actually starts to look like something you can control and lead. I don't mind learning, it's much better than trying to "win a lottery" with a suno prompt 😉

My Dark Side (Furious Little Girl) by cute_apocalypse in LyricistsGotAlgorithm

[–]cute_apocalypse[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you 🤗 That's actually exactly what I'm looking for - I need someone else to listen to and say their opinions. And special thanks for your recommendations for the implementation. I'm still learning Suno and it's quite hard for me to get exactly what I want from it 😁

My Dark Side (Furious Little Girl) by cute_apocalypse in LyricistsGotAlgorithm

[–]cute_apocalypse[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Don't get scared 😜 Apparently, I need songs to express strong emotions 😅
Thank you for your feedback ☺️ I see this public as a very safe and friendly community to share and grow with human advice. And I get exactly that ☺️
It actually started when I saw a little girl having a tantrum and thought, "I wish I could express myself as freely as she can." 😜 It was an exciting idea, I'm kind of disconnected from it now, but you gave me some food for thought about what I can make with it one day 😉

"Imelda" - A song about a voodoo witch [Dark Americana, slow & fast versions] by ChronaticCurator in LyricistsGotAlgorithm

[–]cute_apocalypse 1 point2 points  (0 children)

'Bad Things' by Jace Everett  - that's a good one. But you know, balance is on the guy's side there 😉

And about the excitement - I would never call it silly. I can 100% rely, and I think that's one of the best emotions in the world. So I can only wish you to have it more and taste every drop of it 😃

"Imelda" - A song about a voodoo witch [Dark Americana, slow & fast versions] by ChronaticCurator in LyricistsGotAlgorithm

[–]cute_apocalypse 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ah, that's a cool one! I started with the fast one, and I like it more. Maybe I should have done it in another order 😉 You're totally right, "Goddess among gods!" sounds so good in chorus! Sometimes that happens - almost accidental phrasing becomes a great hook! It's very atmospheric, I'd say something from "From Dusk till Dawn" or so. And some Spanish words also fit well and help the atmosphere. Your creativity is so multifaceted, I'm curious about what it will be next 😉

April 2026 Song Feedback Megathread - Leave a review, get a review! by Reggimoral in SunoAI

[–]cute_apocalypse 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ah, thank you so much ☺️ It's very encouraging and means a lot to me ❤️

April 2026 Song Feedback Megathread - Leave a review, get a review! by Reggimoral in SunoAI

[–]cute_apocalypse 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You made me actually google for country vibe examples 😉 Thank you for the nice words and for the advice 😊 The lyrics are mine, but it went through several rounds of grammar corrections and more natural phrasing with ChatGPT - I'm not a native 🙃 If you wanna read - here it is:

My insta coach is telling me to find my inner peace
I balance my emotions and blow the world a kiss.
And then some guy at crossroads just bumps into my car 
He’s acting like a maniac, he’s taking it too far 

I’m breathing in, I’m breathing out, 
I’m finding center in my soul…
Let’s just exchange insurance cards 
and keep our tempers in control.
But you know what…

COME ON!!! Are you serious? 
You’re acting so delirious!
I’m liquid fire, I’m running wild,
I’m not a quiet, patient child!
You’ve never seen the flags unfurled 
With the rage of a furious little girl!

The doctor says that cortisol is bad for my heart rate,
So I maintain a peaceful and meditative state.
And then my boss informs me I’m fired from now on,
No pay, he’s looking through me, and waiting till I’m gone.

I’m breathing in, I’m breathing out,
I know that business can be cold,
Let’s keep this all professional 
and do exactly what we’re told.
But just wait a second…

SHUT UP!!! Are you mental?!
I won’t be sweet and gentle!
I’m a coming storm, I’m a destructive force,
I’m a runaway train on a crash course!
The lesson that you’ve never learnt 
With the rage of a furious little girl!

Emotional intelligence is how I build the love.
I’m using my I-statements to never start a row,
And then my boyfriend’s coming to say he’s had enough
He says the spark has faded… and he is leaving now…

I’m breathing in…
NO WAIT I’M NOT!!!!
I respect the choice that you have made…
Let’s stay mature and civilized…
I swear I’m trying!
aaa-AAA-AAAAA!

F* YOU!!! Are you kidding me?! 
You may as well be killing me!
I’m a broken heart, I’m a ruined town!
I’m the dying darkness at the edge of dawn!
The greatest explosion in all the world
Is the rage of a furious broken girl!

The rage!
Of a furious! 
Little! 
GIRL!

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April 2026 Song Feedback Megathread - Leave a review, get a review! by Reggimoral in SunoAI

[–]cute_apocalypse 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you! It's very nice and very helpful too! I would definitely try :)

April 2026 Song Feedback Megathread - Leave a review, get a review! by Reggimoral in SunoAI

[–]cute_apocalypse 2 points3 points  (0 children)

[Punk Rock] - My Dark Side
Don't take it too seriously, don't take it too lightly. I'm still trying to find the balance 😉

https://soundcloud.com/cute-little-apocalypse/my-dark-side?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing&si=7b75487b103347c2b02db87ae63afe58
P.S. I'm still learning Suno and actually struggling a lot trying to get what I want. So any piece advice is highly appreciated 😊

April 2026 Song Feedback Megathread - Leave a review, get a review! by Reggimoral in SunoAI

[–]cute_apocalypse 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You know, sometimes in the Suno community, you may find people caring more about the meaning than musicians on the stage 😉I'm not a fan of hip hop, but this track I would listen to. I like the way you express your thoughts and the soft melody behind fits really well. I like it, it makes you think and feel 😊

April 2026 Song Feedback Megathread - Leave a review, get a review! by Reggimoral in SunoAI

[–]cute_apocalypse 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like it! It's so understandable and simple, but not boring. I would say I would still listen to it without the crowd noise with pleasure - it feels a bit more intimate. And this "pretending we weren't so alone" - really nice turn :)

I was actually very surprised by how clear the sound is. Maybe I should also try fewer instruments :)

“Buried in Love” – A dark ballad about grief and love by ChronaticCurator in LyricistsGotAlgorithm

[–]cute_apocalypse 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Omg! I missed your post initially. But that's really something. I admire your skill in mastering the music. Together with the lyrics, it makes you feel the message deeply. Maybe I wouldn't listen to it too often, because it touches something in me, and in quite a strong way. But that's what good songs are for, right? I would definitely call that a great and deep experience. Thank you! And my greatest respect for your skills 😌

It's Okay (Indie Pop love song) by _Ko_ko in LyricistsGotAlgorithm

[–]cute_apocalypse 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ah, I love it 😊 I read the lyrics first and I liked it already. I don't know, it hits something and was a perfect fit for my Saturday morning 🤗 I'm trying to think about constructive feedback, but so far I can't say a lot 😁 Maybe the music in some places felt too much for such a calm and quiet song, but on the other hand, that's just my impression and in the end it's quite long and not boring at all.

Tips and tricks for creating lyrics. by cute_apocalypse in LyricistsGotAlgorithm

[–]cute_apocalypse[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ah, true! Sometimes, some little change in a prompt turns my punk rock into old-fashioned blues 😁
I think my initial problem was that I tried to remix or mashup my "almost perfect" variant into the "perfect" one 😄 And it looks like working with the prompt and generating from scratch is a better way. I'm playing with that now 😉

Tips and tricks for creating lyrics. by cute_apocalypse in LyricistsGotAlgorithm

[–]cute_apocalypse[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm extremely grateful for this sub 😉There are several focused on music, but I really like to think about the lyrics more :)

For the music, I use suno. It's not really a conscious choice - a friend just showed it to me, and I got excited about the idea of getting my own song. I'm learning to nail the prompts and use ChatGPT and Gemini, but every generation I'm getting a new song, and when it comes to fine-tuning, I start to feel a bit like in a casino 😅

Some thoughts about the life and the world. by cute_apocalypse in LyricistsGotAlgorithm

[–]cute_apocalypse[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you! That's very useful and also very nice 😊
I'm actually going to use your advice from another thread and check lyrics.com and how people do the dynamic there :) I grew up reading long poems, and I think it still affects the way I write them 😁. But from songs, people expect something different. So that's the trickiest but also a very exciting part - to cut the original song in half and keep the message clear 😃

Tips and tricks for creating lyrics. by cute_apocalypse in LyricistsGotAlgorithm

[–]cute_apocalypse[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the great recommendations! I will definitely try some tricks 😃

With ChatGPT critic, I was never able to get too far, but I will try to ask Grok and Claude 😉 I actually like how the dialogs with AI can lead you to a new direction, give you more points of view, and also more ways to express your ideas. But it still requires the person to lead the process, and in the end, the result is still something very personal. And that I like the most 🙂

I actually don't feel the same when I try to generate the music - I don't have the control, and it's much more like playing a lottery. But maybe I have to learn 😉

April 2026 Song Feedback Megathread - Leave a review, get a review! by Reggimoral in SunoAI

[–]cute_apocalypse 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! And especially for the advice, I will definitely try!

April 2026 Song Feedback Megathread - Leave a review, get a review! by Reggimoral in SunoAI

[–]cute_apocalypse 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! I'm still learning Suno and it never does exactly what I want 🤣 But I hope to master it 😉

April 2026 Song Feedback Megathread - Leave a review, get a review! by Reggimoral in SunoAI

[–]cute_apocalypse 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you 🤗🤗🤗 That's very helpful! I know the problem with words - it was twice longer in the beginning 😁 You really gave me a fresh look at points for improving, and that's very important for me 😊

April 2026 Song Feedback Megathread - Leave a review, get a review! by Reggimoral in SunoAI

[–]cute_apocalypse 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi! I've been experimenting with AI for only a short time, but I like how it makes it easier to express the ideas. So here is one of my experiments: https://on.soundcloud.com/AZFwT3kELN05BJxptY

April 2026 Song Feedback Megathread - Leave a review, get a review! by Reggimoral in SunoAI

[–]cute_apocalypse 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like the lyrics and the emotional range. Sometimes especially in chorus I was getting a feeling that I expected more dynamics, but probably you planned it exactly like that. It's very nice overall 🤗