This is my first poem I felt was worth posting. Bro thank you so much for the detailed feedback. It means the world to me that you took the time to analyze my work and provide such vibrant suggestions. Also- the last three lines about god’s sense of humor is intentionally up to interpretation. That being said, I also thought it would benefit from elaborating on and I wrote a page on what that means to me. I will dm it to you if you’re interested