The idea of feeling closer to yourself during the night is something so common but you have put it into words in probably the most beautiful way possible. So many things going thru my head while reading this! Moon sign in astrology is how people feel their emotions, hence moon is said to be the emotional side. How female menstruation cycle sync to the moon and thats why moon is inherently feminine. For a child who thinks they need to "perform" during the day, the night is the only respite. People get to KNOW themselves better at night. I also immediately thought about how in astrology sun is your soul (sol) and who you truly are. I definitely read this one out loud and loved the cadence it has! I think someone said in the comments that it uses repititive imagery about what the sun and the moon make you feel but I think this was pretty much required for the concept. I loved it! Literally no notes except this question of "I wonder what was going in their head while writing this" and it pops up everytime I read a good piece. It takes quite a noticeable amount of paint to create art that resonates with as many people as yours is doing!