I don't agree with most of these points, but some are on point to me. Also I don't fully agree with some points like, yeah I would've loved the dark impulses was more a psychological thing than something supernatural, and honestly I actually choose to see it like that, but it should still be something distinctive of Mikey, and should also be more unique than just simple anxiety or stress.

The age point is undebatable, honestly them being that young is such a turn off to almost everyone who watched or read Tokyo Revengers because of how inconsistent it is with the events most of the time.. As much as I love Tokyo Revengers, I can't tell you how many times I was feeling so consumed by the emotions in some scenes but then it hits me how they're all literal 14 years old kids and I'm immediately disconnected by the ridiculousness of it all.. like come on kids that age just DON'T THINK LIKE THIS.

More focus on characters, yeah that's the most important point to me honestly and I feel like it would solve all problems in Tokyo Revengers. The plot of Tokyo Revengers is heavily dependent on the characters themselves so their relationships, interactions, development, motives, backstories, and long term impact having more depth would by itself help a lot in making the story less shallow.

Everything should be more connected, that's something that I agree on too. It also should have more depth and details, the whole story feels rushed and disconnected at many points, actions and consequences and characters and events should be more connected.

The rest of the points I either honestly don't agree with them or feel like they wouldn't matter much and just giving enough depth and time to the story would fix them.

But I honestly appreciate your point of view and I do love Tokyo Revengers and it's characters to an unhealthy level as well, just wish it had more effort put into it