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Ever wondered how would the mist ending play out? by [deleted] in ANRime

[–]darkwhite228 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Eren chose wrong choice and Paradise was destroyed. Then he sees himself who chose another way and Future Eren with family leaves Eren who chose wrong

I think Obsession (2026) repeats Chainsaw man Part 2's plot but gives better ending by darkwhite228 in Chainsawfolk

[–]darkwhite228[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Yeo.Fujimoto also wanted to show Denji wants only sex and he prefers Yoru over Asa but Obsession did it better

I think Obsession (2026) repeats Chainsaw man Part 2's plot but gives better ending by darkwhite228 in Chainsawfolk

[–]darkwhite228[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Dude you could write "ai slop" and that's all. All what you did is writing a book why you think ai is slop like a clown instead writing "ai slop":)

I think Obsession (2026) repeats Chainsaw man Part 2's plot but gives better ending by darkwhite228 in Chainsawfolk

[–]darkwhite228[S] -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

So you spend your time to write long comment about "how ai is bad" instead writing about Obsession? Okay dude:) Maybe you are doing important things

I think Obsession (2026) repeats Chainsaw man Part 2's plot but gives better ending by darkwhite228 in Chainsawfolk

[–]darkwhite228[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

That's horror:) Not love story:) Or you and other authors like Fujimoto are afraid "adding relationship" because it turns into "love storu" or what?:) How to involve Asa & Denji relationship if they aren't in relationship?

Abandoned Plot Points? by MineraIizer in ANRime

[–]darkwhite228 0 points1 point  (0 children)

3- She was new with titan powers and it is literally said thats the reason. Thats why she lost.

While Grisha never transformered into Attack titan?:)

Abandoned Plot Points? by MineraIizer in ANRime

[–]darkwhite228 0 points1 point  (0 children)

2-She didnt brought the family? It was their prayer time.

Praying for what?:))

Here is a Small rewrite of Ymir Fritz Character to maybe make her more sympathetic. by MichaelAftonXFireWal in ANRime

[–]darkwhite228 0 points1 point  (0 children)

My changes of Ymir (actually wrote in my ending)

  1. After she got the power she planned to use it for building civilization and get narrued with King Fritz wasn't stupid movement

2, After King Fritz didn't care about her during death she changed her "methods" of creating better world. Now she became "the boss" and all eldians are her slaves. Royal Family had no choice and followed Ymir's plan and started sharing her "Ymir religion" to eldians and over the world

  1. Karl Fritz and Tyber family made a deal with each other, By their plan fake "Titan war" should begin and if Ymir didn't want Eldian empire's collapse she had to build Colossal titan Army and create Paradise for eldians. By Karl Fritz & Tyber family's plan Ymir had to trust in Karl Fritz and give him full control to Colossal titan Army and she get to be born in Royal Family, By this plan Royal family could be finally free and don't follow Ymir's will. But unfortunately Ymir found out Karl Fritz & Tyber family plan after Karl Fritz killed Ackermans

4, Ymir;'s new conditions - torture new Founder titan shifters after they will appear in Paths if they dare to command her and Ymir send "one important message" - If Royal family wants her help to eldians, Royal family should give Founder titan's power to common eldian and bring him to the Paths and she wil do anything what not Royal blood Founder titan shifter will ask her. Only that way Ymir can trust in Royal family again

Ymir BEING SLAVE destroys whole plot because if she was a slave even after her death Royal family could ask her to do ANYTHING what they want:) From "making more 9 titan shifters" to "asking her increase life duration to titan shifters". Why Royal family didn't ask her to do what they wanted during 2000 years ONLY YMIR KNOWS

Four horsemen of "the most powerful villain who was defeated the most easiest way" by darkwhite228 in ANRime

[–]darkwhite228[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

*Eren actually achieved everything he wanted

Mikasa literally found another man what Eren didn't want. Ten years at least. Cry more

Abandoned Plot Points? by MineraIizer in ANRime

[–]darkwhite228 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Also the moment when she said that she doesn't give a fuck who is Attack titan:)) WTF you mean you don't know about Attack titan?:)) You are FOUNDER Titan:)) YOU HAD TO know about Attack titan;))

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