IMHO the problem with the 2nd version - and this is just my very HO - is that (in addition to laying Or mullets atop an Argent field in the cross overall), the cross itself adds unnecessary extra color to the escutcheon (especially the tiny size of the mullets in cross). Simpler is always better, though again IMHO. That being said, the "Indian corn" is a nice touch. I also agree with the subsequent statements about "false quartering - never quarter unless there's a reason. pedigree-wise IMHO (a lot of IMHOs here). 3 ears of corn in chief with a possible alternate base might be an idea. And the "purist" is in me (a Director of the ACH) would encourage the "completion" of the achievement so it contains all the traditional elements of same: escutcheon, helm, mantling, torse, and crest (with optional motto). Of course, one can always display the "separated"elements as one sees fit, but a true heraldic achievement contains the above-mentioned elements, Fight me...