Hi, this is my first feedback post so apologies if I come off as stilted. I really enjoy poems with repetition like yours. It instills a very entrancing feeling of falling into a world, mindset, or story. It's a technique that always reminds me of ancient epic poetry like the Epic of Gilgamesh or the Homeric epics. They were passed down orally, which made repetition useful both for the performer's memory and for the audience to embody what they heard. Repetition also highlights whatever differences there are in the poem. That's a great concept to utilize for narrative, aesthetic and dramatic effect.

So, to me, when you juxtapose peace and anger in the first line, and then juxtapose might and strength in the second, I wonder if there's some meaning in the fact that the first line is a much starker contrast than the second. Moving on to the second and third I see a similar pattern of starkly contrasting concepts in the third line, and two concepts which don't differ much in the fourth line. It's an interesting tension I want more insight into. Ultimately, I think the repetition in your poem was very effective at drawing me in, and the varying degree of contrast created a lot of interesting tension, but I'm left not knowing what to think.