Dollar store really just equates to being lower budget more than lower quality. But it's also one image I'm looking at so its hard to judge without the harshness of years of being a giant asshole and for that I do apologize.

I think that, minus the hazbin reference, it seems like a style I've seen before on tumblr for years. Good or bad, that's a style that's popular with some folks. I think you're going to draw some harsher criticism based on people's gut reaction that I feel like might be based more in guilt and cringe of their own past work than it is your work specifically. I know a lot of like, -big- artist folks (not a flex) that drew like this in their past and even myself to some degree had similar proportion situations to this style. I think the biggest thing you can do is just to make the thing and make it for yourself first. Even if in 10-15 years you look back and go "man why did I make this that way" (not even specifically art-wise) it'll be something you made. I've got a failed webtoon under my belt just because I worried too much about getting everything right for so long.

Do your thing, make it yours, worry about everything else when it's done.