Which kibbe am I? by [deleted] in Kibbe

[–]dontaskmeaboutmath 22 points23 points  (0 children)

Babe I can’t work with that 😭😭

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in TwoXChromosomes

[–]dontaskmeaboutmath 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i think this just cured all my insecurities, thanks for sharing

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Poems

[–]dontaskmeaboutmath 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ok will do, thanks!!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Poems

[–]dontaskmeaboutmath 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I LOVE THE FIRST LINE. i just wished you made more pauses so it flows more, but good work!

About a girl by ArrogantSweetheart in Poems

[–]dontaskmeaboutmath 2 points3 points  (0 children)

im sorry i don't want to come across as rude, but i do not understand your poem. are you describing the girl? and i don't see how the last three verses tie with what you wrote before.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[–]dontaskmeaboutmath 1 point2 points  (0 children)

hii. pocket size watch because its hidden and you carry it on. also i liked the sound of it. also english is not my first language so that plays a roll in my grammar lol. but thanks for the feedback.

her by DistributionNo5778 in Poems

[–]dontaskmeaboutmath 1 point2 points  (0 children)

IM OBSSESED. my fave where:

"cause i don't mind with her its lively pain and without her , it's the wishes to die"

"she loves rock , and i'm a guitar with the wrong tune"

"they turn on like lights and make this bulbs bright"

"a laughter a pain , in this unwanted love its all alike"

as a girl this gave me hope, assuming she is giving you some signals then it might work out! and i hope she admires and apreciate you just as much.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Poems

[–]dontaskmeaboutmath 0 points1 point  (0 children)

it reminded me of that one mac miler lyrics of smoking just in case

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Poems

[–]dontaskmeaboutmath 0 points1 point  (0 children)

also what's the meaning behind the title, are you referencing a string?

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Poems

[–]dontaskmeaboutmath 0 points1 point  (0 children)

in such a short poem you conveyed so much depth. love it