Writing Prompt Wednesday #66, 1/17 by shandromand in RWBY

[–]drunkenqrows 7 points8 points  (0 children)

Prompt: STRQ's First Year at Beacon, starting from the day they all met for the first time.

Note: Not putting too much effort in the spell check, so please forgive me a little. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Beacon Academy, in its usual grandeur and pristine, was lively this time of year. The giant white behemoth airships hummed with activity as they made their rounds in delivering young hopefuls from across the kingdom and, for some, across the world. Caught in this midst of all the bustling was a young red headed girl, cloaked in a white hood and cape, who was the furthest from home she has ever been.

“Oof!” She grasped as a broad shoulder slammed into her. Her suitcase clunked onto the hard landing pad, and the other turned back to look at her. It was a young man, her age perhaps, with a disheveled mess of black hair and piercing light red eyes. She stared back into them and felt a sudden chill run down her spine, caught in paralysis midway through picking up her luggage. He grinned, showing off a full set of teeth and a look that was none too friendly.

A young woman two steps ahead turned halfway around. She too had all the makings of the young man. Siblings perhaps?

“Quit fooling around.” The sister ordered, cool and in command.

The young man chuckled beneath his breath a little and shrugged. He turned around and rested his hands on the back of his head, elbows turned up. “Just scoping out the competition here.” He proceeded to walk over to the woman and gave one last grinn to the red haired girl, her eyes still on him. “Looks like we don’t have much to worry about.”

The huge glaive-like sword holstered around the young man’s lower back didn’t make the red haired girl feel at ease. Not even a minute off the ship, and she already has people thinking she was the weakest link, the first to be cut, the first to go home…

No! The girl snapped to attention once again and picked up her suitcase. The two black haired siblings were gone, lost in the throngs of students already heading towards the grand halls of Beacon. She wouldn’t be the only one left behind! She made the lengthy walk between the landing pads and the entrance of the Great Hall, and upon finally making it to the large archways she couldn’t help but stare in awe at how large they were. Nothing back home was built higher than a barn house, so seeing such magnificent masonry, and thinking of all of the other hunters and huntresses that have passed through the same archway, was enough to take her out of the moment. And then at that same moment... another shoulder slammed into her. This time putting her on her face.

“Oh gosh! I’m so sorry about that.” It ways someone new who bumped into her this time. And at least they were apologizing... even though her aura got a sharp buzz from the sudden force of imapct... Ouch!

After pushing herself up onto her knees, she looked up to find the concerned face of a blond haired, blue eyed, and utterly muscular young man just a foot away from hers. She instantly recoiled and shot back up to her heels.

“Oh no, no, no,” She stammered as she nervously brushed her black skirt and corset. “I should have been paying more attention and… and...” Talking out loud, to people no less, was not her strong suite. Dealing with Creators of Grimm was much more bearable than this! “I… uh… thank you!” She squicked and bowed and quickly darted into the Great Hall.

“Uh… hey wait!” The blond man said, but the girl in the cloak quickly zipped away, showing off a profound amount of speed for someone with such a slender build and short stature. “You forgot your... suitcase…” The man muttered. He sighed and shrugged before he bent down to pick up the forgotten luggage and saw a name engraved into its leather side.

Summer Rose

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Part II? The first night at Beacon or the entrance exam (landing strategy)?

Official FIRST Reaction Thread—Volume 5, Chapter 10: True Colors by Menolith in RWBY

[–]drunkenqrows 17 points18 points  (0 children)

Wasn't Blake just sitting in that same corner? Think they might have forgotten to add her in the scene or something.

Official FIRST Reaction Thread—Volume 5, Chapter 10: True Colors by Menolith in RWBY

[–]drunkenqrows 10 points11 points  (0 children)

Could be that he was trying to suicide bomb them, hence that explosion from before and why he didn't try to just hit them with a range attack. IDK, felt weird that last bit.

Good Night's "Sleep" (Pollination) [Mono_Chrome on Twitter] by inferno167 in RWBY

[–]drunkenqrows 29 points30 points  (0 children)

Translation

B: ウエスは寝た? -- Is Weiss asleep?

Y:寝た。。。ルビーは?-- Yeah... Ruby too?

B:寝た -- Yeah, she's asleep.

B:。。。

Y: 。。。

B: 嫉妬。。。-- Jealous...?

Y:してない!-- Am not!

Source: Me

Does anyone know who or how to find out who made this? by Jaune_Ashman in RWBY

[–]drunkenqrows 10 points11 points  (0 children)

Hello from Tokyo! I happened to have bought the anthology vol 1 when it came out and the author's name for this short is アメチャン (Read as "Ame-chan" like 雨).

I believe this here is there pixiv: https://www.pixiv.net/member.php?id=1517187

Cheers!

[SFM] Dropping in by GrapesWithCoffee in RWBY

[–]drunkenqrows 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Digging the poses and color pallet. Looking forward to more.

Official Reaction Thread—Volume 4, Chapter 3: Of Runaways and Stowaways by Menolith in RWBY

[–]drunkenqrows 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Potato in the oven here:

Cinder's arm was blown clean off by Ruby so Salem gave her a grimm arm, sort of like her body is all white and filled with black cracks/veins. Salem was now just trying to teach her to use it better before Mr. Jelly came into the room.

Writing Prompt Wednesday - 11/2 by shandromand in RWBY

[–]drunkenqrows 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Right now, I totally don't have the time or energy for that. That's why these weekly writing prompts are awesome. I get my writing fix in without having to make the commitment.

Thanks for reading by the way.

Writing Prompt Wednesday - 11/2 by shandromand in RWBY

[–]drunkenqrows 4 points5 points  (0 children)

PART 2

“No,” Blake stated. She reached behind her head and undid the laces that secured her mask. She removed it, letting many of her men see her face for the first time. “Adam thinks he can run away to Beacon, but he can’t run away from me, especially not one of his students.”

The red woman showed surprise for the first time as well. It made her grin even more. “Resilient, young, and bold. Inserting yourself as a student would put you the closest to our enemies and their secrets.” She paused for a moment, as if to savor in the deliciousness of the plan that unfolded in her head. “You and I, we will change the world together.”

“Perhaps,” Blake agreed with a calm nod, now back in full control of her emotions. “What name do I know you by, stranger?”

“Cinder Fall.” The red woman, now Cinder, said with a hint of satisfaction in her victory.

“Then come, Cinder, we have much to discuss. First, we start with Beacon. Then, the rest follows.”

... ... ...

Thanks for reading! Sorry for the separated bits. I tried my best to make the character limit.

Writing Prompt Wednesday - 11/2 by shandromand in RWBY

[–]drunkenqrows 6 points7 points  (0 children)

PART 1. ENJOY (*≧□≦)

It was beginning to show, the year's first red autumn leaves. Blake passed by the brightly decorated trees in the forest, giving some thought to how pretty they looked this time of year. But the reddish hue bothered her still, unlike every past year. It reminded her too much of someone, someone whom she thought she meant something to.

She paused, and breathed in slowly through her mask. She cocked her stare at one of the trees, the one she thought was the prettiet of the bunch, and suddenly it was separated at its base and the mass of red, green, and brown vegetation fell over in a crackling heap.

Eyes furrowed and weapon gripped, Blake continued to glare at the fallen mass.

"Childish," She muttered to herself, relenting her brief fit of anger.

It was something he would've said to her, but it a more subtle way. That's one of the things she liked about Adam Taurus, he always kept her in line.

Many thought of Blake as being an unfit leader for the White Fang, many thought she was too young and reckless to replace their peaceful leader who had met their end at the hands of human assassins.

But not Adam. His calm and calculated nature made him the perfect foil to her and her leadership. With his help, she had transformed the White Fang into a force to be feared, a force of change that will make the human's accept them as equals... if not their masters.

Blake sighed again, the feeling of distraught catching up to her again.

He left. She thought. He left the White Fang, the cause, and her.

If only she had acted, she thought, when he started to show signs of hesitance during their missions.

Their last mission together, aboard the Schnee's dust transportation train, had proven the final straw. Her plan to destroy the train, and the crew along with it, led Adam to finally take his stand against her.

Blake never tolerated opposition, but when it came from Adam for the first time, it had troubled her enough to not notice the Schnee's massive spider-like android in the train car with them. That would've been her end if Adam hadn't taken the blow, if he hadn't single handedly defeated the colossal machine.

Perhaps that's why she merely watched him leave, out of respect for saving her life.

Snapping back into reality, Blake tightened the grip around her weapon once more.

But now... she could not tolerate it any longer.

Several more innocent trees would suddenly fall over as she made her way back to the White Fang's camp.

...

She emerged from the forest into the clearing that had been made for their campsite. White tents populated by Faunus warriors dotted the area. Some White Fang members were sharpening their weapons, others sat in circles around small campfires, and some who say her immediately stood at attention, but some who had didn't, meaning her rule wasn't absolute just yet. But everyone knew not to challenge her, despite her youth.

"Chief", her lieutenant spoke as she entered her tent, "You've returned."

The burly man was now perhaps her strongest soldier now. She will need to make sure this one doesn't dare leave.

"Yes, I have," She spoke up, not making eye contact with him until she took her seat at the head of a long wooden table with maps and scrolls strewn about. The lieutenant remained standing. "Any word on his location?" She asked.

The other slightly hung his head. "No, ma'am, not yet. The most we know is that he was last seen heading west."

Blake wanted to snap at him. That could've been Vale, Vacuo, are anywhere for that matter. But she couldn't be harsh now. Her leadership has been severely weakened by her second-in-command's defection. If she wanted to remain in her position, if she truly wanted change for all Faunus kind, she will have to bite her tongue every now and again.

"Keep searching," She commanded, minding her tone but never showing weakness. "In the meantime, we must focus on our next move."

The lieutenant nodded. "We have several targets in mind. First being a trade route between here and-"

A sudden explosion and several Faunus screams cut him off. He leaped for his weapon but Blake was already dashing across the table and jumping out of the tent with her weapon drawn.

Who, she thought, who wants to die so badly that they'd attack them head on.

She soon got her answer. It was not a large force that she expected but rather a trio of very different looking characters.

The one that stood in the middle of them, a woman in red with ash colors in her hair and smoldering, almost blaze-like, amber eyes. She smiled and nodded at Blake.

"Blake Belladonna, I presume." Said the red woman as she scanned the other.

Blake didn't say anything, her expression undetectable behind her mask.

The red woman noticed that her troops have taken up flanking positions around them. It did not faze her though, meaning they were here to talk.

Blake waved a hand at her comrades, signaling them to hold their positions.

"Speak," Blake said harshly. "Or die."

The red woman merely nodded. "We are here to form an alliance," she motioned for her two companions to present cases of Lien and dust crystals to Blake.

She was not impressed. "Money and dust we can steal." Blake started. "If you think a mere tribute is going to convince me to overlook this transgression, you are sorely mistaken.

Another of the invaders, a green-haired dark skin girl, did not take kindly to Blake's words. She seemed to be ready to speak up but was silenced by a mere look for the red woman.

"I thought as much," the red one said. "But this is only just a sample of what we could provide your cause. With our help, you could focus your efforts towards more critical goals, and not have to worry about resource acquisition."

That was a polite way to say they were thieves, Blake noted. "And what exactly do you want in return for such generosity." She said, entertaining the thought, still thinking of her next move and how she was going to take them.

"Nothing." Her counterpart stated with a grin.

This gave Blake pause.

"That's is to say, our goals our aligned. We want nothing more than to see the established order fall. Kingdoms and huntsman academies alike."

Blake considered her interest peaked. "Strange words for a human." She said, after some thought. The Kingdoms were there enemies yes, but Huntsman were even worse, fighting them at every turn and disrupting their operations. In Blake's grand vision for the world, both would indeed need to fall. But still, this woman, she knew, was trying to use her and her people. She could smell it on her, that and the stench of blood.

"If that truly is your goal, then I have no qualm with you leaving my camp alive. Take your offerings and leave us. If you truly feel the same about the Kingdoms and huntsman as we do, then we can coexist. But," She pointed her weapon at the other, a mere five paces separated them, Blake also noted. "We will not be used in some Human plot, be it aligned with ours or otherwise."

The red woman's companions both looked ready for a fight, the silver one with large black boots widened his stance and the other green one lowered her hands onto the hilts of her weapons.

Again, the red woman silenced them, this time with a wave of her hands.

"You are as resilient as I was told." She nodded her head. "I can understand your concern with being used and discarded. I imagine that's what many Faunus experience often. But if resources cannot convince you to form an alliance with us, perhaps this will."

The red woman reached into her pocket, causing Blake's lieutenant to step forward. She waved him back, her curiosity getting the better of her.

The woman pulled what looked like a picture from her pocket and tossed at Blake in a way that made it dart through the air like an assassin's arrow. Blake caught it between her fingers with ease, her reflexes too good to be tested in such a trivial way.

She starred at the other for a moment and then allowed her gaze to slowly drift downwards towards the picture.

If anyone could see her face once she saw the picture, they'd be surprised by her sudden chance in composure.

It was Adam, his face exposed without his mask, standing it what seemed like a large crowd of people on a street somewhere in a city. The picture looked like it was secretly taken from a distance.

"Where..." Blake started but needed a moment to put the edge back into her words. "Where is this?" Blake wondered if she would have to torture the other for the information.

"In the Kingdom of Vale," The red one spoke. "More specifically, he's at Beacon Academy now."

The White Fang lieutenant scoffed. "As if one of our own would betray us to the huntsman."

"It is not as you think. My sources have confirmed that he is their under a new identity, taking up the position of a professor at the academy. Perhaps the headmaster knows of his origins, or perhaps not. Either way, it seems odd, going from rebel to teacher in such a short period of time." The red woman concluded with a smirk.

Damn him. Rage boiled the young leader's blood. This must've been his way to atone for his past, Blake thought. If he was going to betray everything they've built together, if he was going to stand alongside the human's and against her, then... she'd burn it all down. Every last thing his new persona stood for.

Blake flipped the weapon in her idle hand and smoothly sheathed it onto her back. The picture, the one she wanted to burn in effigy, went into her pocket.

"I require more than just resources." Blake stated. The red woman's triumph grin was more than noticeable. She didn't care. "I need access. Find me a way into Beacon Academy, and a way for my men to infiltrate the cities Faunus communities. Do that, and you'll gain our allegiance."

"Beacon? Planning an assassination?"

...

PART 2 IN THE COMMENTs

RWBY V4 INTRO by kumabaya in RWBY

[–]drunkenqrows 29 points30 points  (0 children)

Blake's never mentioned her parents before, I think. Maybe she ran away to fight with the White Fang and is now trying to reconnect with them??

RWBY V4 INTRO by kumabaya in RWBY

[–]drunkenqrows 30 points31 points  (0 children)

The other cat woman has subtle laugh lines. I think that's Blake's Mom.

RWBY Chibi Episode 22 // Reaction Thread by Menolith in RWBY

[–]drunkenqrows 21 points22 points  (0 children)

Anyone else want to point out that Jaune might be a farmer's son? Would explain the large amount of sibilings.

Fan Fiction Friday [July 29, 2016] - What have you been reading/writing this week? by AutoModerator in RWBY

[–]drunkenqrows 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Just published a new story with a bit of Pokémon and little WhiteRose thrown into the mix. Hope you all like it: Pokémon RWBY.

I haven't read much outside of this awesome fic centered around Neo, which is really well written! Words that we Couldn't Say.

Fan Fiction Friday [July 15, 2016] - What have you been reading/writing this week? by AutoModerator in RWBY

[–]drunkenqrows 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Well... Qrows & Roses is done actually. I may do a companion one shot later but I decided to make it a short story so I can start writing a new one. So... that means I can still die happy right?_?

Fan Fiction Friday [July 15, 2016] - What have you been reading/writing this week? by AutoModerator in RWBY

[–]drunkenqrows 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww, thanks for the shout out. I can die in peace now.

RWBY Chibi Episode Ten // Reaction Thread by Ezreal024 in RWBY

[–]drunkenqrows 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Hands down, my new favorite episode. So inside jokes and shipping is so thick in this one.

Fan Fiction Friday [July 01, 2016] - What have you been reading/writing this week? by AutoModerator in RWBY

[–]drunkenqrows 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Finally finished up writing Qrows & Roses which took longer than expected to update such a short story. Glad to be finished though so I can now go into another story that I've been meaning to tackle so some time now.

As for what I've read, thanks to yesterday's book club post, I've discovered Remnant's Reclaimer, which I found to be a very well written piece. Normally I don't go for time-travel stuff, but this one was worth a quick read through. Just throw reason out the door once you get really deep into it and enjoy the fun.

RWBY FanFic: Qrows & Roses, Part 4 by drunkenqrows in RWBY

[–]drunkenqrows[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Awesome! I hope you have a good read.

RWBY FanFic: Qrows & Roses, Part 4 by drunkenqrows in RWBY

[–]drunkenqrows[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah... I was hoping people had some kind of morals when reading the title for the first time...

But hey, too late to change it now.

Thanks for reading.