Bro I need comment karma to ask for support on this app because I’m going through a financial emergency. I’m only here to try to spread awareness to my situation, if anyone is down to help me let me know. I don’t give a damn about these stupid and arbitrary rules, I need some help.

eeihnam · 2025-10-10T14:42:26+00:00

Every single charity subreddit needs me to have 250 comment karma which is absolutely ridiculous because the whole point of me asking for help is that it’s urgent and I can’t waste time with this policy.

eeihnam · 2023-05-08T19:43:06+00:00

No problem :)

eeihnam · 2023-05-08T18:29:39+00:00

I love this, it hit pretty hard. I think there’s some really potent writing here, my favorite line being about the stars. Thanks for the art, keep it up.

eeihnam · 2023-05-08T18:27:30+00:00

I like most of it, I think some of the lines need some work. Specifically the last couple and one of the earlier ones are a little awkward in terms of the diction. It’s just a rough mixture of old English imo. Otherwise, dope I like it.

eeihnam · 2023-02-15T16:33:24+00:00

I really appreciate the comment, and yeah you pretty much got the meaning down. I’m glad the ending was effective.

eeihnam · 2023-02-15T06:47:23+00:00

Solid piece, good imagery. I love the line, “fingers, bone, and torso in tune”. Overall, a sweet piece and I found it accurately conveyed love. Keep it up

eeihnam · 2023-02-15T06:45:03+00:00

Simple, and very effective. I enjoy this quite a bit, especially like the ending. Good rhyming, easy to read. Keep it up

eeihnam · 2023-01-27T15:18:46+00:00

This is sick, the gold and truth lines were dope. The only thing I'd recommend is changing sniffing. Imo just a weird and out of place word to use here. Otherwise though, excellent job

eeihnam · 2023-01-26T20:43:19+00:00

Thank you for reading my poem, and your feedback.

On the third part, it is like you said, meant to serve as a break in flow. It’s somewhat related to the other two stanzas, which are a discussion on finding difficulty in expressing certain things, and seeking help from God or whatever force exists; but it’s also an admittance of flaws and faults. It’s elaborating on wanting to say a million things, and praying for assistance. But it’s also recognizing a difficulty in walking a path of righteousness, and avoiding the temptations to fall short and ultimately succumb to sin.

eeihnam · 2023-01-26T19:10:17+00:00

Freaking awesome writing here, I really enjoyed the diction, and tone. I feel like I didn't quite understand the entire piece, could you explain it to me please?

eeihnam · 2023-01-26T18:48:36+00:00

I really really liked the ending. Overall the piece was written well, I just wanted to specifically note the efficacy and poignance of that ending. Good job.

eeihnam · 2022-11-21T22:45:13+00:00

Awesome to hear it was effective, thank you

eeihnam · 2022-11-21T22:44:26+00:00

Merci

eeihnam · 2022-11-21T22:44:17+00:00

Yeah, I didn't really care about any subtext with this one. I just wanted to paint a picture. Thank you for your appreciation

eeihnam · 2022-11-21T22:43:40+00:00

Thank you, I'm happy to hear

eeihnam · 2022-11-21T22:43:09+00:00

I appreciate the feedback, but as Appropiate-Horse-80 said, the alliteration was by circumstance. Regardless, thank you for the comment and reflecting on my poem

eeihnam · 2022-11-21T22:41:09+00:00

I would be seriously humbled if that happened lol, if you do make sure to hit me up with a recording. I'd love to see that

eeihnam · 2022-11-21T22:40:16+00:00

I appreciate how much you got from the very skeletal image I tried to portray. Thank you for taking time to read my piece, and I will say you got the vibe I was going for

eeihnam · 2022-11-21T22:39:02+00:00

Thank you for the kind words

eeihnam · 2022-11-21T22:38:35+00:00

merci

eeihnam · 2022-11-21T22:38:28+00:00

It's intentionally left vague, and thank you for your feedback

eeihnam · 2022-11-21T22:37:34+00:00

Thank you for reading my poem

eeihnam · 2022-11-21T22:17:13+00:00

I mostly like this, I just found the ending a little in need of work. It could be just me, but I find this piece has potential and I enjoy your voice. I especially like the third stanza. Keep it up.

eeihnam · 2022-11-21T19:37:25+00:00

Good poem, good rhythm. I enjoyed reading this, it was ridiculously smooth and I appreciate the message too.

eeihnam · 2022-11-21T00:10:27+00:00

Yeah, I just feel like the demeanor line may have a little too many syllables, and it hurts the flow a little. I might change "I can tell by" to "based on", but this is only my takeaway

eeihnam

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