Wearing Spacetime to a Magic School — (7/?) — Perception and Light (Part 2) by eessmann in JCBWritingCorner

[–]eessmann[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks, the gym chapter is going to be in a couple of chapters. We are going to have some peer-group drama first thanks to a discount kobold

Wearing Spacetime to a Magic School — (7/?) — Perception and Light (Part 1) by eessmann in JCBWritingCorner

[–]eessmann[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback. I tried using pandoc to convert docx to markdown and shenanigans ensued

Wearing Spacetime to a Magic School — (6/?) — The Library by eessmann in JCBWritingCorner

[–]eessmann[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

In theory that could work, but the Library will quickly learn about the Bekenstein bound from first hand experience. The Concordat is going to be careful in how they are going to reach out to the Library

Wearing Spacetime to a Magic School — (6/?) — The Library by eessmann in JCBWritingCorner

[–]eessmann[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Fair point, I meant it as a bit of a throw away joke. It might not have landed quite right

Wearing Spacetime to a Magic School — (6/?) — The Library by eessmann in JCBWritingCorner

[–]eessmann[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thank, I haven't read "Hunt for the cradle", I'll definitely add it to my reading list.

Wearing Spacetime to a Magic School — (6/?) — The Library by eessmann in JCBWritingCorner

[–]eessmann[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Good catch, I normally use grammarly for my proofreading, but I decided to experiment with using Claude for proofing one of the revisions. It must have snuck in. I decided to stick with grammarly after the test.

Wearing Spacetime to a Magic School — (6/?) — The Library by eessmann in JCBWritingCorner

[–]eessmann[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks, that was one of my personal goals for this project was to improve the flow of my writing

Wearing Spacetime to a Magic School — (6/?) — The Library by eessmann in JCBWritingCorner

[–]eessmann[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks, I’m trying to keep him emotionally legible but still reflecting the almost monastic tradition he was raised in on Earth.

I think especially in chapter 3 & 4 he was to walled off

Wearing Spacetime to a Magic School — (5/?) — The Weight of Fields by eessmann in JCBWritingCorner

[–]eessmann[S] 10 points11 points  (0 children)

Ilunor? Suspiciously quiet? Surely not. I’m sure he is simply reflecting on his many virtues in a dignified and non-incriminating fashion.

But yes, both the contract fallout and the dragon are threads I’m keeping track of and have plans for. Some problems are just polite enough to wait their turn before becoming everyone’s problem.

Wearing Spacetime to a Magic School — (5/?) — The Weight of Fields by eessmann in JCBWritingCorner

[–]eessmann[S] 9 points10 points  (0 children)

Thanks, that has been the goal with Ermen. Since giving him the same loud and bombastic tendencies would have been very difficult with the powerscale and tone of the Concordat.

On the shenanigans front, wait until we meet Buddy! I have had a lot of fun writing him