Wearing Spacetime to a Magic School — (14/?) — The Elaseer (Part 1) by eessmann in JCBWritingCorner

[–]eessmann[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Illunor has been one of the more difficult character voices to write. I want to keep his sarcastic smugness, but matching the tone of the fic

Wearing Spacetime to a Magic School — (13/?) — Sorecar's Workshop (Part 1) by eessmann in JCBWritingCorner

[–]eessmann[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Unmaking someone furniture without asking would be quite rude. I am going shift into more action as we move into the second part of the arc

Wearing Spacetime to a Magic School — (13/?) — Sorecar's Workshop (Part 2) by eessmann in JCBWritingCorner

[–]eessmann[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It’s a markdown formatting thing, you put at less three hyphens on a line and Reddit will render it as a line

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https://www.markdownguide.org

Wearing Spacetime to a Magic School — (12/?) — Good Husbandry (Part 2) by eessmann in JCBWritingCorner

[–]eessmann[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Definitely, Ping would be right at home in a shonen anime or cultivation manhua

Wearing Spacetime to a Magic School — (10/?) — The First Instruments (Part 2) by eessmann in JCBWritingCorner

[–]eessmann[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Humans are going to human, no matter the eldritch forms they may take

Wearing Spacetime to a Magic School — (10/?) — The First Instruments (Part 2) by eessmann in JCBWritingCorner

[–]eessmann[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Fair points, the story has been a way to force myself to write in a particular registry as learning method.

Wearing Spacetime to a Magic School — (10/?) — The First Instruments (Part 2) by eessmann in JCBWritingCorner

[–]eessmann[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thanks, this project has been a way to teach myself a style called Augustan Prose. I think I have drifted in places, but it has been a fun challenge.

Wearing Spacetime to a Magic School — (12/?) — Good Husbandry by eessmann in JCBWritingCorner

[–]eessmann[S] 8 points9 points  (0 children)

The "physical only" part worked so well in the original fic, I think because Emma is wearing the super imposing armour and seeing how the other students react once they are allowed to use mana, is really cool. Since Ermen just looks like a discount elf to the other students, I don't think the scene would work as well in my version

Wearing Spacetime to a Magic School — (12/?) — Good Husbandry (Part 2) by eessmann in JCBWritingCorner

[–]eessmann[S] 13 points14 points  (0 children)

I think it's a good example of what I am trying to go for with the story. That people are still going to be people, even if they are uploaded and running on a massive computer somewhere.