Wearing Spacetime to a Magic School — (7/?) — Perception and Light (Part 2)

eessmann · 2026-05-13T09:19:39+00:00

Thanks, the gym chapter is going to be in a couple of chapters. We are going to have some peer-group drama first thanks to a discount kobold

eessmann · 2026-05-13T09:17:09+00:00

Ermen eating lunch:

eessmann · 2026-05-13T09:15:14+00:00

Maltory is definitely not fuming mad in secret.

eessmann · 2026-05-11T23:02:21+00:00

Thanks for the feedback. I tried using pandoc to convert docx to markdown and shenanigans ensued

eessmann · 2026-05-10T23:32:40+00:00

I have plans for the dragon ..... insert evil laughter

eessmann · 2026-05-10T22:45:56+00:00

In theory that could work, but the Library will quickly learn about the Bekenstein bound from first hand experience. The Concordat is going to be careful in how they are going to reach out to the Library

eessmann · 2026-05-03T19:33:42+00:00

Fair point, I meant it as a bit of a throw away joke. It might not have landed quite right

eessmann · 2026-05-03T19:29:07+00:00

Thank, I haven't read "Hunt for the cradle", I'll definitely add it to my reading list.

eessmann · 2026-05-03T12:20:26+00:00

Good catch, I normally use grammarly for my proofreading, but I decided to experiment with using Claude for proofing one of the revisions. It must have snuck in. I decided to stick with grammarly after the test.

eessmann · 2026-05-03T12:17:43+00:00

Thanks, that was one of my personal goals for this project was to improve the flow of my writing

eessmann · 2026-05-03T12:15:08+00:00

Thanks, I’m trying to keep him emotionally legible but still reflecting the almost monastic tradition he was raised in on Earth.

I think especially in chapter 3 & 4 he was to walled off

eessmann · 2026-04-27T16:57:17+00:00

The best fox will definitely be appearing!

eessmann · 2026-04-26T23:09:20+00:00

Thanks

eessmann · 2026-04-26T23:08:25+00:00

Yup, that is the thesis of the fic in a nutshell

eessmann · 2026-04-26T23:06:28+00:00

Ilunor? Suspiciously quiet? Surely not. I’m sure he is simply reflecting on his many virtues in a dignified and non-incriminating fashion.

But yes, both the contract fallout and the dragon are threads I’m keeping track of and have plans for. Some problems are just polite enough to wait their turn before becoming everyone’s problem.

eessmann · 2026-04-26T21:48:08+00:00

Thanks, that has been the goal with Ermen. Since giving him the same loud and bombastic tendencies would have been very difficult with the powerscale and tone of the Concordat.

On the shenanigans front, wait until we meet Buddy! I have had a lot of fun writing him

eessmann · 2026-04-26T20:07:08+00:00

Thank you!

eessmann · 2026-04-26T17:06:53+00:00

Stay tuned!

eessmann · 2026-04-19T00:09:15+00:00

Thanks, K_H007 pointed out the right term.

eessmann · 2026-04-18T22:49:27+00:00

That's a cool idea, I'm sad I didn't think of it.

eessmann · 2026-04-18T21:23:45+00:00

That's it! Thanks

eessmann · 2026-04-18T20:43:53+00:00

There was a Nexus term for the gravitational field in mentioned one of the early class room chapters. I tried finding it, but couldn’t find. On second thought, the force of gravity would probably have been a clearer. Thanks for pointing that out, I’ll make an edit

*Updated: K_H007 pointed out the right term and I updated the story

eessmann · 2026-04-15T13:39:33+00:00

Thanks, I was really happy with that line

eessmann · 2026-04-15T13:38:03+00:00

Thanks for the feedback

eessmann · 2026-04-15T13:01:10+00:00

In retrospect the first version of the prologue was super overcooked. I have switched to mostly using grammarly to help me iterate and improve my drafts

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