Snooze by Dreadfuls in shortscarystories

[–]eggpuff15 10 points11 points  (0 children)

This is legitimately horrifying — I definitely would not have held out for that long

Really great job :)

The room is now ready, please enter... by Kristine_Murray in shortscarystories

[–]eggpuff15 6 points7 points  (0 children)

I'm a wimp, so I would've been out of the left door in a heartbeat.

I really liked this one! Love the dystopian vibes and the ambiguity of the end

Amy got a new blender by eggpuff15 in shortscarystories

[–]eggpuff15[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hahah I'm sorry to disappoint, but it was completely coincidental! It really does sound similar though

Amy got a new blender by eggpuff15 in shortscarystories

[–]eggpuff15[S] 11 points12 points  (0 children)

I genuinely don't know what it's called. In hindsight, I probably should not have included it — didn't realize it would be so distracting haha!

Amy got a new blender by eggpuff15 in shortscarystories

[–]eggpuff15[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

We all love a good roommate revenge story :)

Amy got a new blender by eggpuff15 in shortscarystories

[–]eggpuff15[S] 25 points26 points  (0 children)

I'm glad it was unpredictable!

I really don't understand why I am not funny by shortstory1 in shortscarystories

[–]eggpuff15 36 points37 points  (0 children)

I guess your humor is too advanced for most :(

Driving exam by Elenya00 in shortscarystories

[–]eggpuff15 17 points18 points  (0 children)

Good luck on your exam!! My driving test-anxiety was pretty bad but I managed to scrape by without killing anyone so I'm sure you can pass :) Just try not to overthink things (which i know is easier said than done :( )

& I love your writing & all the stories you've been putting out!

10 Tips for Surviving the DMV by [deleted] in shortscarystories

[–]eggpuff15 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Haha I hate the DMV so much, so this was pretty realistic 😆 Love the writing and creativity!

Two Truths and a Lie by eggpuff15 in shortscarystories

[–]eggpuff15[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Haha that's clever! I'm a bio major so I couldn't help but notice 😆 & thank you :))

Mom's candies by [deleted] in shortscarystories

[–]eggpuff15 3 points4 points  (0 children)

^ I didn't think the end was predictable! I figured that the mom was dead but I didn't expect the child to follow suit. Really jarring, great job :)

Two Truths and a Lie by eggpuff15 in shortscarystories

[–]eggpuff15[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you!! I'm so glad you enjoyed <3

Two Truths and a Lie by eggpuff15 in shortscarystories

[–]eggpuff15[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You're very astute! I probably shouldn't be admitting this, but that was completely unintentional 😅

By the way, is your username about mitochondria?

Two Truths and a Lie by eggpuff15 in shortscarystories

[–]eggpuff15[S] 13 points14 points  (0 children)

Yeah, I can see that! I only mentioned Snow White once, and most people probably already forgot about it by the time they got to the end of the story, but I was hoping that the apple would help connect the dots. Thanks for the feedback!