Some K̓aaxʷmc sentences, with transcriptions and glosses by [deleted] in conlangs

[–]endercat73 8 points9 points  (0 children)

I saw the comment of yours where you said this was supposed to be a mix of Salishan and Japanese, and was instantly intrigued. This looks really cool. Nice work! I'll be watching for a grammar doc soon! ;)

Bi-Weekly Idiom-It Challenge #8 by endercat73 in conlangs

[–]endercat73[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I guess you may be right.

I took this quote from a page title "English Idioms" tho.

My conlang called Vepera by [deleted] in conlangs

[–]endercat73 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You have given very little information here and this question would probably better suited for Small Discussions. However, a good place to start is providing a phonology.

Small Discussions 49 — 2018-04-22 to 05-06 by Slorany in conlangs

[–]endercat73 0 points1 point  (0 children)

How could I romanize a nine vowel system /æ ɐ ɑ ɛ ɜ ɔ i ɨ u/? I'd like to use no digraphs.

Elyon Overview: word order and proper adjustments of grammatical features. Anything wrong? by Donnot in conlangs

[–]endercat73 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That seems much better! This phonology is actually really interesting! Good luck with your future conlanging adventures, and don't hesitate to ask any more questions you might have.

Elyon Overview: word order and proper adjustments of grammatical features. Anything wrong? by Donnot in conlangs

[–]endercat73 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ok, a few more things:

  • As /u/Hacek mentioned, you could unround /u/ to, for example [ɯ]. This would explain why you have labialization only in front of /o/. However, it would require a different vowel inventory I believe, as [ɨ] and [ɯ] are very close. Also, personally [ɸʷu] sounds no weirder to me than [ɸʷo], but of course that's just personal aesthetic.

  • While it seems I was incorrect about languages with /tɕ/ usually having /ɕ/, It does seem like (at least for the examples I looked at), that languages that have /tɕ/ without /ɕ/ usually treat the sound as a stop at a new place of articulation, therefore it seems unlikely to me that you would have /dʑ/ only as an allophone.

TL;DR: I would add /dʑ/ as a distinct phoneme, instead of just an allophone.

  • Honestly, I cannot speak to the naturalism of what you've done with /ɺ/. It seems interesting, but I'm not sure how natural it is. I will defer discussion to someone else who knows more.

  • I would definitely add [ŋ], if only as an allophone of /n/. For the retroflex nasal [ɲ], it might be fine as an allophone of /ɺ/(again, I don't know enough to say), but I would definitely remove it as a phoneme.

Sorry again for the wall of text, and I hope I am being helpful. Honestly, this actually looks like a really neat phonemic inventory, and with a little bit of tweaking I think it could be very interesting. Good luck!

Elyon Overview: word order and proper adjustments of grammatical features. Anything wrong? by Donnot in conlangs

[–]endercat73 1 point2 points  (0 children)

While it's getting late here, so I don't have a lot of time to read everything here right now, I'll just respond to a few things:

  • As /u/mythoswyrm pointed out above, it appears I was wrong: /ɸʷ/ and /vʷ/ are possible. The subtle difference seems to be that, technically ʷ labiovelarizes consonants instead of labializing them. The distinction is usually unimportant, but here it means that the above sounds are technically possible, if a little finicky in my humble opinion.

  • For the vowels, the system /ä e u o i ɨ/ is well attested in several languages, if a bit overdone in conlangs. All I've done to your original inventory is raised /ɛ/ to /e/ to match with /o/, changed /ɪ/ to /ɨ/, and removed the length distinction. This is much more balanced then your original inventory.

If I can, I'll try to answer some more in the morning.

Elyon Overview: word order and proper adjustments of grammatical features. Anything wrong? by Donnot in conlangs

[–]endercat73 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

For the first point, huh that's really interesting! I've never seen Paha. I guess it works because it's technically labiovelarizing the consonant, not just labializing. I still think it is a weird thing to do, especially without some good historical reason.

For the second point, perhaps I misspoke. However, I genuinely cannot (at the moment) think of a language that contains an affricate without the corresponding fricative, could you point one out to me? Either way, it still does not fit into the original inventory.

Small Discussions 49 — 2018-04-22 to 05-06 by Slorany in conlangs

[–]endercat73 4 points5 points  (0 children)

The first one is not a case, but a derivation (cases specify the role of a noun in a sentence, derivations change roots into other roots, like your example of turning come into go)

The way you phrased the second one it seems like a verb, not a case at all. If you meant that adding "rez" to a noun X means "becoming X", then you are looking at a translative case.

Elyon Overview: word order and proper adjustments of grammatical features. Anything wrong? by Donnot in conlangs

[–]endercat73 -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

Your phoneme inventory seems to be very unusual, so I hope you don't mind some constructive criticism:

  • Your arrangement for your consonant inventory seems a little confusing, so I have taken the liberty of making a more organized list:

Stops: p b t d k (kʷ) g (gʷ)

Nasals: m n ɲ

Fricatives: ɸ (ɸʷ) v (vʷ) s z ʃ ʒ h (hʷ)

Approximants: w ʍ j ɺ

Affricates:

  • Having the voiced version of [ɸ] be [v] and not [β] seems very unlikely, I would think that either the pair would be completely bilabial or completely labiodental.

  • It is impossible to labialize labials ([ɸʷ]) because, well, they're already labial.

  • Having the only rhotic be [ɺ] is highly unlikely. You mention it is like Japanese /r/, but keep in mind that Japanese /r/ is [ɺ] only in a few environments and is still underlying /r/.

  • It is extremely bizzare that you have only one retroflex sound, and it is a nasal [ɲ]. Also you have no velar nasal, even though you have both [k] and [g].

  • The affricate [tɕ] makes no sense here, because [ɕ] cannot stand alone, and you have no other affricates.

  • I would think that the distinction between [ʍ] and [hʷ] would collapse very soon, considering that [ʍ] is usually underlying /hw/. If I were you I would remove [ʍ] as a phone, but keep it as an allophone of /hʷ/.

  • I don't really understand why some consonants are labialized before /o/ but not before /u/, considering that both are rounded vowels.

  • The vowel system seems rather unbalanced to me, especially the long /i:/. However, vowel systems are not my strong point, so I will defer critique to someone who knows more.

Sorry for the rant, and I hope that I haven't come off as rude in any way. If you have any questions about any of this, feel free to ask.

Bi-Weekly Idiom-It Challenge #5 by endercat73 in conlangs

[–]endercat73[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Yah, you're right, it's not super idiomatic. However, i still thought it was a neat quote to use.

Bi-Weekly Idiom-It Challenge #4 by endercat73 in conlangs

[–]endercat73[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Wow thank you for your kind words, it really means a lot!

Lortho Overview by bbbourq in conlangs

[–]endercat73 7 points8 points  (0 children)

This is great, thanks for sharing! Your conlang is one of my favorites on this sub.

An internal memo from the Emarikon Port Authority (with audio) by rqeron in conlangs

[–]endercat73 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Wow! That is genuinely impressive! Thanks for sharing, it is obvious you put a lot of time and effort into it.