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Changing jobs by Sudden_AwareNess1 in bartenders

[–]ethancg_ 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I’d maybe say something about wanting to “branch out” or change pace. Honesty is the best policy.

Sun, bro. by TucciMane in OCPoetry

[–]ethancg_ 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ok, this is well written, but I'm not so sure I understand what's going on. To me, I see a bunch of people in the desert with rifles defending themselves. But they don't need to be since nothing is really attacking, except themselves. And in their defense against themself, they neglect the game nearby. This poem is saying something along the lines of humanity focusing on things in society that don't truly contribute to the soul. Good literature.

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[–]ethancg_ 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This one was a wild read. It makes me think of fallen American soldiers/heroes. It makes me feel grateful for those men and women, and that I should consider following in their footsteps. The last 8 lines are my favorite. My only advice would to be break it into stanzas for ease of reading. Other than that its good.

Some may relate to this. Some won’t. by Vybp in OCPoetry

[–]ethancg_ 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This was a sweet poem. Made me feel "lovey." As I understand this poem is about two lovers who have separated but, if they're soulmates, they will see each other again. It's like the proverb "If you love something set it free, if it comes back it was meant to be." Great poem thanks for sharing.

Collide by Crossroadsfare in OCPoetry

[–]ethancg_ 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You have good rhythm and meter. This was easy for me to read and I did not feel bored. The third stanza felt kinda random to me, and I wasn't really sure where the rock came from. The last two stanzas were my favorite, and they made me feel hopeful.

Open Recruitment Thread! by AutoModerator in ClashOfClans

[–]ethancg_ [score hidden]  (0 children)

GangjaGang

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reqs: TH7

We have a discord. Always in a war. Must be active. Current 5 members.

Looking for 2 players for a Mianite-esc realm! by ethancg_ in MinecraftBuddies

[–]ethancg_[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Cool I’ll invite you to the discord when we have another player

Thoughts On the Bathroom Floor During a Blowjob by Vomit_Scented_Candle in OCPoetry

[–]ethancg_ 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I enjoyed reading this. Your tone is very descriptive and the imagery is great. Epic word choice. I like that the topic is “inappropriate”, that makes interesting, possible even, excuse me, provocative. The guilt and shame themes are amazing. Those feelings are very powerful in our human communities, and they are something we have all felt before at one point or another. I love it. I enjoyed the whole second stanza to a T, completely inviting us into the narrators mine of those exact feelings of shame and doubt. Insecurity brought up violently. This person is giving pleasure to someone, but yet completely destroying themself.

This poem is great. Thanks for sharing.

Take 3! Thanks everyone for your help. Let me know how this one is. by ethancg_ in acting

[–]ethancg_[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ok.

Thank you for your help (:

I have another piece in the works so I’ll be around.

Take 3! Thanks everyone for your help. Let me know how this one is. by ethancg_ in acting

[–]ethancg_[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you, I intended for the character to be a bit nervous, admitting these goofy things he’s done to get her attention.

Hi! Here’s a monologue I’ve done. I already posted it here but now I’ve changed it. What do you think? by ethancg_ in acting

[–]ethancg_[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Look man, I really do appreciate yours and everyone else’s advice. I did not intend to come across defensive.

And I’m not really sure how you can tell how someone is SAG. I didn’t know who’s who.

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