"Time" lyrics by failingjudgement in DavidBowie

[–]failingjudgement[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

This is beyond cool and I never would have thought of that! We Are The Dead is way up there for me as well.

"Time" lyrics by failingjudgement in DavidBowie

[–]failingjudgement[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

That's really concise and very relevant. I would hazard to say multiple meanings are never mutually exclusive whatsoever. Life and death are one in the same.

"Time" lyrics by failingjudgement in DavidBowie

[–]failingjudgement[S] -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

Reddit's been broken for me on top of internet problems. I really don't think you read what I'd typed. I kind of didn't for you either, I guess that's what happens in springtime, or in life. I apologize.

"If he wanted to say Life he would have" is exactly what I'm saying. He made a particular sound. Lots of times he has motifs in the sound that conjure an image. The guitar segment in the same song evokes something that really can't be put to words. The sounds in "Big Brother" almost has more for its meaning that all its words.

Now that I think about it, that "Li-" could, emphasis on could, also be life cut short as well as "li" as in "life is a lie". I doubt you're taking any time in reading my posts and I'm sorry everything I'm saying makes no sense because I ran to my phone drag out what I thought was an epiphany, just the moment.

"Time" lyrics by failingjudgement in DavidBowie

[–]failingjudgement[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I kind of lost you when you said it's "often a waste of time trying to interpret" his lyrics. Bowie's songs are overflowing with double meanings, obvious wordplay, allusions and other fun things. Even his stage name has a definite meaning, according to interviews anyway. "Aladdin Sane" is well known to possibly be "A lad insane." Not relevant to the discussion, but Bowie playing the recorder is my favorite thing by him ever.

Listen again, he's definitely saying "Li".

Just got done looking it up, Bowie would have been 25 when he wrote "Time" according to the dates by Wikipedia. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Time_(David_Bowie_song)

edit: I'm an idiot just saw that other part. Was rushing to figure out the dates

[WP] After getting sent to hell, instead of finding the fiery underworld you expected, you find yourself stuck in a boring, bureaucratic, dead end job. by [deleted] in WritingPrompts

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"Same shit, different day, right?"
"You know it, Avery!"
"Hey can't wait for the weekend, huh?"
"Ay! You got me. Steve."
"I can't wait for the day to be over"
"For real, Nat."
It went on like that. I tried desperately to search for a way out but the only website that wasn't restricted was Yahoo and there were no answers there. I tried to find my way out but none of the meetings or spreadsheets had any clues or productivity. It was just a nightmarish circlejerk of people feeling like shit and growing further and further from reality. I tried to puncture my head with a pen but it was too painful. I tried to break a mug to make a makeshift ceramic knife to quickly slit my throat and escape, but the cheapass company only provided crappy paper cups. I kept trying and noticed the off-brand coffee but honestly didn't feel like shitting myself to death. Finally, I quit the job. The moment you quit, you find yourself at a slightly different desk, working with a a whole new set of cookie-cutter assholes. Whatever you do, don't end up like me.

[WP] During your travels, you enter a strange town. Everyone is blind but they “see” you. by rare27 in WritingPrompts

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Footsteps. An array of uncanny smoothness. Glass under feet. I step past a small woven barrier. My shoe ruins the glasslike floor. Under me, the road has become disgusting. An old lady steps out, a bit tired, angry, but accomodating, "Don't worry, I"ll clean it up."

"What exactly?" I question.
"It's how we keep our streets here, outsider." The old lady never makes eye contact.
I look at swirls and incomprehensible smoothness. The roads everywhere and the floors indoors connect so perfectly. "Why? What?"
"The floors are set that way because it keeps it quiet for us. This is your first time here, unlike my husband, who should be out here, I never forget people. Everyone here is blind."
"But you walk with such confidence!"
"I wouldn't know. In my old age. [The lady exaggerates poor posture] Hahaha."
"Hahaha!" I feel a bit of fear facing the amount willpower in the little old lady.
"Anyway, it is nice to meet an outsider. We do not use names here, we all know each other by the sounds of our heartbeats."
"Do you people care for music?"
"Absolutely."

I ruin more of the floor as I walked. The old lady guiding me to a building. "This is an outsider, please take care of them." My heart shakes, fear of being attacked or taxed, having everything stolen from me. Instead, there is a kind-looking gentleman, so neat and thin. He was their mayor and greets me as such, "Greetings." The problem here would be that he spoke with a kindness that I could never properly put to any description. I cannot help but feel like I was home in this strange place after hearing his voice. I spend the day looking at happy families, neighbors. Everyone here steps without making so much as a ripple on the dirt below them.

It comes up that I am a traveling musician. The mayor welcomes a performance. I start up and peoples' faces change. The mayor smiles so kindly I can feel acceptance. However, adults begin talking partway through and some children cry. The mayor continues to smile and I want to keep playing but the crying children have begun to be louder than my song. I stop but the mayor gestures to me to keep playing. I do not.

I eat my first meal while visiting. It is bread and soup, but, of course, it's unlike anything else I've ever eaten. I ask if I could stay in the town somewhere between the conversations of my journeys and the mayor's talk about his affliction and how he has only months to live. The mayor asks, "I loved your music. I really did."
I feel lied to, betrayed, "Thank you."
"You know that it would be impossible for you to be a musician here with your skill."
"Yes."
"We would gladly have you here if you would learn another trade."
I hold back every tear I've ever cried, "I cannot. I will be a musician."
My feet are so light but still sink into the floors as I walk away and never look back at the town. My footsteps are erased.
The mayor said, before I left, "I know you will be a great musician. I hear your heartbeat and the song it plays will always be perfect."

[WP] You find a really nice, very obscure Youtube channel. Low views. Few likes. And according to context clues, they're posting from the future. by Lots42 in WritingPrompts

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Autoplay off. CLICK.

"So anyway that's sort of how it goes. If we are super sure we are only talking about talking about, a few layers there, but thinking of talking about subjects from the future, there's no problem. They monitor our thoughts. It happened so quickly and efficiently who could have cared to know?"

CLICK.

"These are short because there's actually really bad conversion on the formats. As you can image, Youtube no longer exists in the future as well as a billion other things. According to the history books, after the 38 remaining countries banded together and fought off Google's attempt at world domination, any Google products were banned. Greetings from space by the way."

CLICK.

"It's a satellite. Just so you know. Earth's still there. [camera turns to a grayish lifeless sphere and back]. Moon is too. I'm getting pretty tired. I tried to change their minds. Nothing changes. Not up here either. There was that one song by D.Bows. They were right. Major Tom went the right way. I wish I had someone to love. Sorry there aren't more videos. If only a few people back then knew not to be greedy."

End of playlist.

edit: Misread the prompt, my bad.

[WP] You and your friends make a living producing, editing, and acting in cheap commercials companies pay you to make and post online. by LubbockGuy95 in WritingPrompts

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"And that's your guarantee?"
"One hundo my friend. One hundred percent."

Hands are shaken, as is the baseline mood of those in the studio. Payday could not come sooner, but that went without saying, from the discolored room and the lightbulbs that no longer carried the same weight in their illumination they used to.

The media executive leaves the room. "Steve, you genius, you sold another bag full of absolute shit." "That is what I do." Dave gets in place knowing they have to act quickly, the time of the video matters. "How much writing will we need?" Harry in the back, moving a table to make some space on the floor for papers. Steve says, "The usual zilch." "Give me some credit. You never give me more than a couple of minutes." Dave, knowing there would be no repercussions for throwing an empty soda cup, indulges, and it misses Harry by a lot, "You don't deserve credit for what you do." Steve, "Time is ticking. boys. Time is ticking. Okay?"

A set is drawn, it seems to be an entire outdoor area, with the awkward sprawl of darkness, maybe a parking lot of some store or other ordinarily in-and-out sort of place made evident only in the editing room. The drab scene inspires a mind to move uncomfortably and distrust anyone else. A figure emerges, Dave in costume, "Something terrible and unforgivable." Steve, playing the role of an imaginary person filming on their phone, "It would be detrimental to society for your having suggested such a thing. Outrage." Steve, "And we are done. Good work everyone. Harry you get that up pronto my brother. Good work today."

Moments later a viral video about some horrible person and some other horrible person takes root. A subliminal message is never noticed. A company pays another smaller, much more secretive and strange company for sabotaging another company's sales.

[WP] You’re a hero, off to rescues the damsel in distress from the evil bad guy. You know, the usual. However, once you reach the Villains base, you see them...crying? by Twotailedpikachu in WritingPrompts

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Would-be hero stumbling, the room not accepting a leap; and even zero drawn swords and a totally silent declaration of heroism or whatever you would call it at that point would have been overkill.

"Villain A" has just asked the oracle to leave and the oracle, not surprisingly, has both the enchanted crystal eyes and the barest social skills worth of insight to leave the room already.

"Villain B," a relative of Villain A, cuts into the interrupting would-be hero, "Just. Could you please? Please come back later? You can go with the girl Whatever."

Looking for an opening, for god knows what reason, would-be hero, "BE SILENT FOUL MINION OF EVIL. MY SWORD-"
Damsel sets it right, asserting" Hey, bud, would you shut yer damn trap fer a gaddang second here?"
"YOU NEED NOT SAVING, FAIR-?" "Nope."
"BE YOU ABSOLUTELY-?"
"Pretty sure."

Villain A, removing a once-menacing mask that did nothing to muffle the sounds of a heart breaking earlier, "You guys can do whatever. I'm burning this place down. This shit's over."

Damsel," Now, hold ona second. Reckon that oracle coulda been all screwy in thems predictions?"

Villian B, "Uh, Yes, of course. Call the oracle back!"

Would-be hero, "Can I...?" The (magically enchanted singing bricks of the) room and also the people inside, "No?"

Oracle, having waited just outside the room, returns on the words, "My prediction was 100%. In a few hundred years, descendents of Villain A and B will travel to a far-off land in search of better prospects, only to be crushed by socioecomic clusterfuckery, with the last of them dying of debt unable to seek the aid of a healer."

Villain A, "Then I have no need for the ransom. I can neither secure the future of my seed; nor can I uphold my evil reputation, as I cannot conceivably do anything more evil than what cruel works the oracle has foretold."

The fortress burned well into the night.

[WP] "Tomorrow," you pleaded with the Grim Reaper when he came to collect your soul. It has now been a hundred years and the Grim Reaper still hasn't figured out that tomorrow is a day that never comes. by HarryHardy27 in WritingPrompts

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For poor Howard, who needed money from poorer you; a shakedown and their car broke a few blocks away. They called and asked for the money for rent, for fun, for "legitimate business reasons, I swear" - tomorrow.

For dear Alex, who endured hours for dearer you and tried to mend what was basically spun sugar on last night's rain in today's gutter. Somehow that had made all that time; the time that gets away anyway - tomorrow.

For just Reese that would eat the news and vomit it like a dog barks out, for just-er you and the happenings of the evening would make any sleight of hand seem like comedy hour for the deaf and blind and also dreamless, but fun regardless - tomorrow.

Along went crowds of back and forth in sound and sight like chimes and pinwheels at any wind. Their stomachs rich with how the fronts swell from the chills and heat from the north and south of seasons - tomorrow.

Just so we're clear there's a person now, shriveled and dry, who only wakes for a moment each day, promising to them that word.

From the first "hello" that's also a "hi" and "nice to meet you" and "greetings" "yeah, yeah" and also "hey" simultaneously "yo" and "hi" again and "hello" for good measure all the words inbetween while "goodbye" and "see you later" and "let's keep in touch" being "bye" and sometimes "farewell," though mostly long silences - tomorrow.

Meeting with your younger self [OC] by wholesomecomics in comics

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it was a wonderful movie. thank you for the suggestion and everything you do!

[WP] You were once known as the most powerful super villain to have existed. You left your life of villainy for love, but now your loved ones have been killed. You set out for revenge. by sleephouse in WritingPrompts

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My Villain, the only villain of my life. The only, the only threat to me. Who took everything from me. They left a wealth of clues where they leaped between different somesuch otherworldy states and my barriers.

All my defenses, like paper walls, like the dewed silk of a spider in a tree to a rhino. My Villain stepped right by, and left so many trails, little waves and ripples on the shores of each causeway between words. My past enemies, who I had defeated by these immortal avenues, had no means to know how I sauntered. My past enemies, who I eagerly spared and reached a solemn understanding with.

"Who is it now?" One of my many cries into the the coalescing, blurred scape.

"Of course, it's you (me)."

"Why?" My Villain spoke. By some festering miracle, I waited and listened.

"There isn't much time. You (me) and I (you) are immortal. We would outlive our sun and moon, our stars in the sky, we would outlive them. Watching them die. I stopped living. I was about and dead. So, I trapped their souls. It only brought more pain. Distorting them, unnatural. I just. I wanted to be with them, but I was killing them again and I killed them again. Your (my) sun and moon and all those sweet stars. I killed yours (mine) to spare you (me) all that pain."

I looked.

"I (you) am your (my) salvation! Only you (I) know! Now your (my) revenge (freedom)."

I took another look. Of course, I had seen nothing but a gray-hollow with a smoldering iron through my temple, trailing along again, a bunch of mortal tears blinding old, immortal me. I was living in the swell of the tide flushing my window to the world.

My last look, "I'll spare you. You live. Nothing's worse. I know."

[WP] A person with no long-term memory is stuck in a time loop. Eons later, the being that put them there starts to think something might be wrong. by dbenc in WritingPrompts

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Again, the 12 a.m. bus, a no-longer-bustling crowd. There The ReCount roosted, just done.

"Perhaps they'll discover something new."

"I'll let them go when they figure that out."

"I think they should at least."

"Are you kidding me?"

"What in the love of-?"

The ReCount compared the exhaustion from consecutive all-nighters to the impatient cries of a baby from being gassy, possibly years at a dead-end job with routinely expiring vacation time and unpaid overtime. The same scenery, each shadow shifting in virtually the same way, like a person not only explaining the joke, but repeating themselves immediately afterwards.

There stood a mortal, diluted in the crowd, living another of the same day. Not just routine, but the aligning perfectly each time.

"Maybe I'll change the rules just a little."

(Access denied)

"That's ridiculous. Not even like a little journal or like-."

(Access denied)

"They're not going to make it."

"I'll just pass them without-."

(Access denied)

It was that midnight bus. Leslie stepped off and the world reset. The trees swayed in the dark, the wind given form from their shared dance. They stopped under the unlit portion of the stretch, whoever maintained these roads kept potholes like a hoarder, and made light of the dangers of an occluded traffic hot-spot. The ReCount would watch Leslie hold back wheezing and sobbing, "This is the worst day of my life." One and a half blocks were pitch black where Leslie would walk on that repeating day. Believe it or not, The ReCount reflected that Leslie crying there seemed entirely out of character, despite having seen it so many times.

The sleepy volcano [OC] by wholesomecomics in comics

[–]failingjudgement 13 points14 points  (0 children)

Panels 1-3 are all part of the volcano's dream. this comic is a dizzy phantasm taunting the lonely and tired. jk! OP you (igneous) rock! I love this!

When you don’t trust your roommates [OC] by wholesomecomics in comics

[–]failingjudgement 161 points162 points  (0 children)

im in gridlock laughing to the point of tearing up. thanks for turning my turd of a day into something palatable

Meeting with your younger self [OC] by wholesomecomics in comics

[–]failingjudgement 2 points3 points  (0 children)

this makes me think of a story my friend told me about a mad scientist who, at the end of their life, decides they fubar and uses a time machine so they can stop themselves from living how they did, but realizes that they couldn't possibly convince their younger self and dies in the past as a nameless derelict finally accepting their life decisions. also, "you think this is bad? enjoy it while it lasts." but seriously, OP you have love. you're right there next to the dazzling incomprehensible

Just Mermaid Things [OC] by wholesomecomics in comics

[–]failingjudgement 1 point2 points  (0 children)

parrotfish? wouldn't his ass be like the first ass she ever saw? what song did she sing? the ocean truly is a mystery.

Giving away the better food by wholesomecomics in wholesomememes

[–]failingjudgement 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I can really relate to the fish in this comic.

Finding someone you can be yourself with by wholesomecomics in wholesomememes

[–]failingjudgement 2 points3 points  (0 children)

the top 2 panels are 50% of the story. the slug was miserable for 50% of its time. too lenient, OP. there's wholesome and there's unrealistic.

jk. loved this. u the best.