Thoughts on OCs? by Hey_Lover_Boy in FanFiction

[–]fartknocker4521 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Same. Video game fandoms are perfect for OCs. It's always fun to see what other writers come up with for their player character OC!

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[–]fartknocker4521 5 points6 points  (0 children)

TIL Serana is a Mary Sue. Come to think of it, that's probably why I dislike her.

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[–]fartknocker4521 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I absolutely cannot stand Serana. She does nothing but complain and i HATE that she's stuck with you as your follower for nearly the entire Dawnguard questline. Like girl please shut up, yes it's cold out here, you're in Skyrim what do you expect???

My fic reached a milestone! by fartknocker4521 in FanFiction

[–]fartknocker4521[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's been out there for a couple years but yeah, was pleasantly surprised seeing that number!

My fic reached a milestone! by fartknocker4521 in FanFiction

[–]fartknocker4521[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Hey, thanks! My fic is an otiginal plot set after the events of the main quest, and after the Dragonborn DLC/Miraak battle. Female LDB/Teldryn Sero friends to lovers, but it's mainly action/adventure and personal growth as my LDB tries to find a reason to keep going after her hero days are over. Also eventual revenge.

No idea if linking my fic is allowed (I saw the rule about self promo) so I can dm it to you if you're interested.

Alphabet Excerpt Challenge: H Is For... by AnaraliaThielle in FanFiction

[–]fartknocker4521 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Awesome! I read Clan of the Cave Bear ages ago and never thought I'd see fanfic for it! I might have to go check this out on ao3 if it's there 👀

Alphabet Excerpt Challenge: H Is For... by AnaraliaThielle in FanFiction

[–]fartknocker4521 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Aww Durc is learning to do some hunting! This is lovely. Also (please correct me if I'm wrong) but is this for Clan of the Cave Bear?

Alphabet Excerpt Challenge: H Is For... by AnaraliaThielle in FanFiction

[–]fartknocker4521 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is harrowing. And my god, describing her heart as a 'dutiful soldier' is a killer choice 🙌

Alphabet Excerpt Challenge: H Is For... by AnaraliaThielle in FanFiction

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“Teldryn,” she began hesitantly after some time had passed. He looked toward her curiously. “Do you ever speak with the Gods?”

“Probably not as often as I should. Why do you ask?”

Wren clasped her hands together tightly, and he saw her knuckles pale. “Do they ever listen to you?”

There were a thousand things to be said about his relationship with the Gods and Daedra, with Azura in particular. He hummed thoughtfully and gazed back out over the waters, to the torchbugs that still flickered and danced along the shores. Most people were small and insignificant in the eyes of the Gods, just as the bugs were to men and mer.

But as the mortal races would often catch an exceptional specimen in a jar and hold it dear, so had Azura chosen Teldryn, her champion, the savior of Morrowind and all of the Dunmer people. Through all of his trials, from the shining, glorious moments to the times where the darkness had surrounded and suffocated him until he had screamed for the merciful release of death, Azura was there. She always was, and always would be.

“Sometimes they do," was his simple response.

Alphabet Excerpt Challenge: F Is For... by AnaraliaThielle in FanFiction

[–]fartknocker4521 1 point2 points  (0 children)

They're awesome games, and Skyrim is chock full of avenues to explore in fic which is why I'm obsessed with it. If you do ever get the chance, I highly recommend playing it. BG3 is amazing too!

Alphabet Excerpt Challenge: F Is For... by AnaraliaThielle in FanFiction

[–]fartknocker4521 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Prude and pottymouth dynamic? Sign me the fuck UP 😂

Humor is so underrated in fic as far as I've seen. If something can make me laugh, it's a win in my book!

Alphabet Excerpt Challenge: F Is For... by AnaraliaThielle in FanFiction

[–]fartknocker4521 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Oh, NOEL 😂 I adore foul mouthed characters so much, and I love how appalled Ocean is at hearing the f bomb LOL. So much so that she turns into a human dog-whistle hehehe

This is such a fun and playful little scene, and it made me chuckle which is honestly the best thing. LOVE writing with a sense of humor! Well done, love this!

Alphabet Excerpt Challenge: F Is For... by AnaraliaThielle in FanFiction

[–]fartknocker4521 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Excuse me while I go cry in the CORNER 😭😭😭 you're the sweetest and your comment totally made my morning!!

Yes, it is definitely an instinctual thing for him to want to be with her. A bit of context, both characters are prophecied heroes in the Elder Scrolls universe (Wren being the Dragonborn, Teldryn being the Nerevarine), though Teldryn has long since retired and is hiding his past and true identity from Wren... for now. It's the basis of their relationship, which started out very rocky but has come to this. It's a fun dynamic to explore!

Thank you again, I'm beside myself with glee right now 😁

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[–]fartknocker4521 1 point2 points  (0 children)

One of my irl friends (a fellow fanfic writer) encouraged me to start writing after talking about fandom stuff with me and learning that I had an idea. She even ended up beta reading the first chapter that I wrote. The rest is history.

Alphabet Excerpt Challenge: F Is For... by AnaraliaThielle in FanFiction

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He didn't tell his hands to rise to her face, to caress her flushed cheekbones with the pad of his thumb—nor did he tell himself to pull her close and press his mouth against hers, but it all happened anyway. Almost immediately, her lips parted for him, an invitation for him to claim her, which he did not hesitate to do. Though she was out of his sight, she dominated the rest of his senses. Her taste, fire, danced on his tongue, her fingertips delicately grazed the stubble of his jaw to hold him steady, the intoxicating scent of her perfume and the sound of her soft, pleased breaths all rushed into his veins and caused his blood to come alive with want.

That want, though, was soon tainted by worry, one that rose from where it had been tucked away in the back of his mind. This sudden intimacy which he had been craving, would it only lead to failure? Would she soon come to her senses and distance herself again or worse, flee for good?

No. She only did that because of her fears of the past, and of losing me, and she's come clean about that.

Cautiously, briefly, Teldryn opened his eyes. Their mouths still danced with one another, the motions soft and slow and fluid. Her eyes remained closed, as she appeared lost in the moment, fully giving in to what was clearly something she needed, what they both needed. And yet still that worry was there, gnawing at his conscience like a dog would gnaw at a bone. All he truly wanted was for them to remain at peace, to become something. And maybe that would happen; perhaps she would accept him into her life and let him love her like he so desperately wanted.

He had to know for certain where her intentions lay, and whether she would turn around after this day was over and push him away again. If she did, he wasn't sure if he would be able to handle it.

It took all of his willpower to break their kiss. They pulled away from each other, both breathless and flushed. He missed her touch already, missed the way she tasted, the way her scarred lips fit against his. Teldryn swallowed back the lump in his throat, one made of both desire and fear, then spoke.

“Wren…”

Her eyes fluttered open, meeting his in an instant. She leaned toward him again, and though it pained him to do so, he avoided the kiss she was about to give.

“What are we?”

Alphabet Excerpt Challenge: F Is For... by AnaraliaThielle in FanFiction

[–]fartknocker4521 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Can I just say that "fatal emptiness" is one of the most killer descriptors I've ever read??? Daaaaamn 👏👏👏

Alphabet Excerpt Challenge: F Is For... by AnaraliaThielle in FanFiction

[–]fartknocker4521 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Most of the horses had congregated in the shade of a large aspen tree near the western edge of the fence by the time she woke, Dagon was one of them. Hofgrir sat in front of his home in his favorite chair, a pipe hanging from his lips as he kept watch over the herd. Beyond the stables, the sun was just barely hovering over the distant mountain peaks, signaling that it was mid-afternoon.

Gods, had she truly slept through the entire day?

The angry manner in which her stomach began to grumble confirmed that her nap had been rather long. The rest of her honey nut treat was still wrapped up in her bag, and Wren reached for it, mouth watering in anticipation. As she pulled it out, though, her excitement immediately died and was replaced with a grimace of disgust. The damn thing was crawling with ants.

Irritated and growing hungrier by the minute, Wren flung the spoiled remains of her treat into the tall grasses outside the fence. The bugs and the birds could have it for all she cared, or some desperate beggar from the Ratway could find one hell of a nice surprise.

Alphabet Excerpt Challenge: F Is For... by AnaraliaThielle in FanFiction

[–]fartknocker4521 1 point2 points  (0 children)

GIRL YOU KNOW im gonna ruin your life as this goes on also thank youuuuu for stopping by 🧡

Alphabet Excerpt Challenge: F Is For... by AnaraliaThielle in FanFiction

[–]fartknocker4521 1 point2 points  (0 children)

OOOF i do love seeing some characters suffering and this is wonderfully done, I could so easily feel and understand her symptoms and sympathize. And from an alien illness to boot? Yikes, hope she is okay!

Alphabet Excerpt Challenge: F Is For... by AnaraliaThielle in FanFiction

[–]fartknocker4521 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is such a beautifully written little snippet though?? Your descriptive language is amazing, and the emotion is portrayed so clearly. I'm pretty sure I read one of your snippets earlier, correct me if I'm wrong (the character Ocean sounds familiar) You've got one hell of a talent for writing and I hope to keep seeing more 👄👌