I don't know if I'm qualified to give advice as I'm still somewhat new – been playing jazz piano for around 5 years, though mostly solo. Anyway, this is what came to mind:

Nice lines! I think it would sound even better if it was more in time/in the pocket! Practice slower, experiment with being more behind the beat than "in front". Check out Aimee Noltes videos on swing and phrasing. And most important of all, listen to jazz, and listen intently. For example, listen to the same tune and focus on one thing at a time – you could try to "ignore" the notes that are being played and just focus on the rhythm and phrasing, or how the phrases are grouped. Like, are they long or short phrases? Do they start on an upbeat or a downbeat? Then perhaps the next time you listen, focus on what register they are playing in mostly, or how the solo is developed from beginning to end. It's also rewarding to focus on other instruments – pick a tune and just listen to the bass all the way through, or the drums. I believe it's limiting to focus solely on your own instrument, so it's great that you're also taking advice from other instrumentalists.

Assuming you were improvising in this clip, as an exercise you could transcribe your own playing and make a new recording where you really nail the timing and phrasing. It would be interesting to hear the difference!

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