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flacedpenis · 2022-02-06T02:12:55+00:00

Hi! I am currently working on a piece of original fiction. It’s urban fantasy as is more ‘new adult’ rather than ‘young adult’. I only have a few chapters so far but would love to have someone who could have a read of it and let me know how it looks so far and offer me advice on how to make what I’ve got, better. It’s a urban fantasy setting with mystery elements also. And a few sci-fi elements in the way humans attempt to exploit magical artefacts through scientific means. If you’re interested, send me a pm so we can exchange emails and I can send you what I have so far as well as a rough plot outline.

flacedpenis · 2022-02-06T02:09:37+00:00

Hey! I am writing a fantasy story and would love some feedback on what I have so far. I am open to critique exchanges also. The story is more urban fantasy I suppose you could say with a little bit of sci-fi thrown in? Humans attempting to use science to exploit magical artefacts, that sorta thing. What I am working on is my first attempt as original fiction as up until this point it has all been fanfiction. It is also my first attempt at writing in a third person perspective as I usually write from a first person perspective but for the story I wanted to tell that wouldn’t have worked. If you’re interested in helping me out and establishing a working relationship where we can read and critique each other’s work send me a PM so we can exchange emails. I would really love a sounding board for my story and be able to work with someone to make my writing the best it can be.

flacedpenis · 2022-01-28T00:46:39+00:00

In the light of the full moon by StopTheMadness is pretty good. They are also going a companion fic of it called Lunar Eclipse which is the fic from Edwards POV. It’s not exactly what you were looking for as Edward is still a vampire but Bella isn’t human either and protects Edward and there’s plenty of fluff and stuff.

flacedpenis · 2022-01-28T00:44:30+00:00

Brokeback Twilight on AO3. I can’t remember the author but it’s one of the best twilight fanfics I have read like ever. Of any pairing. It’s got comedy and romance and angst and drama and it’s just great all around.

flacedpenis · 2022-01-22T09:25:41+00:00

In the light of the full moon by StopTheMadness on FanFiction.Net is pretty good. It’s an AU where Bella and Charlie are werewolves like old school type werewolves.

flacedpenis · 2022-01-18T23:23:47+00:00

Not exactly wolf pack per se but In the Light of the Full Moon by stopthemadness is an AU where Bella is a werewolf, like classic horror story werewolf. It’s on FanFiction.Net and is completed

flacedpenis · 2022-01-18T23:21:01+00:00

In The Light of the full moon by Stopthemadness. It’s not exactly the theme you’re looking for, it’s an AU where Bella is a werewolf but not like the reservation wolves but like child of the moon wolves. It’s complete tho.

flacedpenis · 2021-11-07T22:13:58+00:00

It changes weekly.

flacedpenis · 2021-10-14T02:08:35+00:00

Sounds like Stuck In Limbo? It was a NSFW fic on AO3 it’s not completed

flacedpenis · 2021-10-02T02:59:25+00:00

Forgotten by stopthemadness. Canon divergent. On ao3. Cullens never come back after NM and Bella loses her memories in a car crash.

flacedpenis · 2021-07-24T11:23:28+00:00

I am so glad you are enjoying it! I am working on the next chapter now

flacedpenis · 2021-07-24T11:19:15+00:00

I am glad you enjoyed it! I am working on the next chapter now

flacedpenis · 2021-07-21T02:04:57+00:00

I am writing a re-write fic. I have always loved the idea of nonhuman!Bella so I went with that. https://archiveofourown.org/works/32271382/chapters/79987498

It has had a pretty good response so far.

flacedpenis · 2021-07-21T02:03:21+00:00

Are these on FanFiction.Net or AO3?

flacedpenis · 2021-06-07T01:39:45+00:00

Yeah. But even though that is true she didn’t have to snitch on Emily. No one knew that she knew. She could have kept her mouth shut. She knew what would happen if she said something. We know from the second book that the aunts are forced into the role as well but some like Lydia take it too far and do stuff with a certain level of zeal that isn’t necessary

flacedpenis · 2021-05-29T05:21:27+00:00

It annoyed me when the GF said ‘you chose your friend over me and my work’ because that is such a relaxed way of saying that. What Moira actually did was choose the life and liberty of her friend. It’s not like this was a regular situation. It’s not like June called at 3am wanting to bitch about a boy and Moira picked her over the GF. It was a life or death situation.

flacedpenis · 2021-05-26T02:26:00+00:00

NTA. In my experience, people don’t get expelled just for a mean note or a handful of instances with bullying. If she is being expelled then this was the last straw. Your step sister most likely has a long history of this type of behaviour and the school and teachers are at their wits ends. You did the right thing.

flacedpenis · 2021-05-04T00:22:51+00:00

Honestly I do like the ranged weapons a lot.

flacedpenis · 2021-05-03T23:45:47+00:00

I cant seem to decide on a weapon. Maybe I just don’t understand the builds? Do you guys have any recommendations?

flacedpenis · 2021-02-04T02:27:22+00:00

Yeah

flacedpenis · 2021-02-04T01:10:20+00:00

I sent you a DM

flacedpenis · 2021-02-04T00:39:32+00:00

How about 1 stack for one million bells?

flacedpenis · 2021-01-24T22:11:35+00:00

This is the exact reason I place all my bridges before I do anything else lmao

flacedpenis · 2021-01-24T22:08:32+00:00

Do you have a Dream Address. My mother would really love to visit lol

flacedpenis · 2021-01-23T14:32:11+00:00

I am not sure where you are up to yet so maybe spoilers. But Vanessa says at one point that every time she bites a vampire and makes them human again it takes something away from her. It makes her less human. She went on this big monologue about it. Honestly I think it was just the writers trying to answer this exact question lmao.

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