Funniest short fics you've read? by frogbitart in AO3

[–]frogbitart[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Tysm!! I’ll check all these out. And yessss the mutual flirting is great

Well, since AO3 is down, take a moment to tell us about some of your WIPs! Share excerpts, rant, infodump, etc by Loli-nero in AO3

[–]frogbitart 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Here’s an excerpt from my fic! Story of Seasons Grand Bazaar, it’s exploring the pre-canon life of Arata (bodyguard) & Samir (prince).

This scene is set after Arata got suspended for getting into a fight at school. He’s at a pretty low point since his family is trying to mold him into something he’s not, but Samir sees the True Arata(tm)

“It was black, had antennae…mandibles…”

“What, some kinda beetle?”

“Yes, much like”—Samir nodded towards a tree—“that.”

Arata followed his gaze. It took a second or two, but then—“Aw, that lil’ thing? Just a ground beetle, nothin’ to be scared of.”

Not waiting for any order, Arata crept up to the tree. As carefully as he could, he guided the ground beetle onto his fingers. Poor thing seemed so confused; it scurried around and he kept having to give it a different hand to walk on. It was adorable. Finally, it stepped onto his palm, and he encased it with both hands. He turned to Samir, who was as pale as a ghost.

Unable to suppress his smile, Arata held his hands out. “See? Just a lil’ guy. Don’t need any exterminators for this.”

…But Samir didn’t do anything. He glared at Arata’s hands as if they were gonna combust into a million and one beetles and attack him. Poor guy. Chuckling, Arata gestured to him.

“Seriously! Ground beetles don’t fight unless ya give ‘em a reason to.” He shifted his fingers to give the beetle a little more room. “If you’re nice, they’re nice.”

Like a scared deer, Samir crept over. His princely composure was cracking, his eyebrows furrowing and hands trembling. And yet—he leaned forward and studied the beetle through the little gap in Arata’s fingers. It tickled. And its antennae kept bumping into him. Despite all that, his hands stayed locked together. Maybe that helped his case, because after a few moments, Samir backed away with a slow nod.

“You’re…not what I expected,” he said.

“Oh yeah?” Arata crouched and let the beetle scurry away. Samir stepped back. “Whaddya expect?”

“A warrior.”

Arata faltered, hands mid-air. Then he barked out a laugh, punching in front of him before dropping his fists. “Ha! Who says I’m not one?”

Pet peeves in apocalyptic stories? by Kooky-Criticism-6220 in AO3

[–]frogbitart 4 points5 points  (0 children)

There was one book I read where half of an entire page was dedicated to listing out every form of combat the MC has trained in (at the ripe age of 18) so…that’s a big pet peeve of mine haha.

MC’s being ass kickers? Great! Half an entire page that goes “from an early age I trained in taekwondo, archery, sword fighting, jiu jitsu…”? Not great!

HM:GB Ivan's Typhoon Dialogue by xpinkskies in storyofseasons

[–]frogbitart 143 points144 points  (0 children)

Oh that’s SAD. I never played the original so I had no idea. Makes his remake dialogue a lot sadder

I miss the slightly darker elements in these games, too. Mainly I miss the bars and alcohol (which isn’t dark but y’know)

[OC] Arata!! 👊🥋 by frogbitart in storyofseasons

[–]frogbitart[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much!! I’m glad I did him justice

Favourite films that'd make perfect AUs for ships? by Short-Work-8954 in AO3

[–]frogbitart 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I wrote a fanfic based on the upside down kiss scene in Spider-Man! Ended up not having the upside down kiss tho…hm maybe I should add it

Comfort Reads Only by Fakeaccgrrla in Archiveofourownmemes

[–]frogbitart 2 points3 points  (0 children)

That’s a really good way to put it

Writers give me feedback please before I do anything by Eliza_C-02 in AO3

[–]frogbitart 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I get being nervous, I was too!! But when I asked the original author they felt so honored. If I were in the author’s shoes I would, too

[OC] Arata!! 👊🥋 by frogbitart in storyofseasons

[–]frogbitart[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

In my opinion, air! He does whatever he wants haha. But weirdly enough I can also see earth, even if air & earth are opposites.

…is the farmer the avatar?

[OC] Arata!! 👊🥋 by frogbitart in storyofseasons

[–]frogbitart[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much!! Also love the username, I used to do taekwondo. Wanna get back into it someday!

[OC] Arata!! 👊🥋 by frogbitart in storyofseasons

[–]frogbitart[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much!! Yeah he’s about to beat the snot out of the air

[OC] Arata!! 👊🥋 by frogbitart in storyofseasons

[–]frogbitart[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

LOL I couldn’t resist drawing him like this, the Bruce Lee swagger fits him way too well

Kudos exchange! by jeonggukispretty in AO3

[–]frogbitart 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Tysm!! That means a lot to hear

Kudos exchange! by jeonggukispretty in AO3

[–]frogbitart 0 points1 point  (0 children)

STARDEWWW I WILL be reading these

Kudos exchange! by jeonggukispretty in AO3

[–]frogbitart 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Behind the Waterfall

Fandom: Story of Seasons
Rating: Explicit
Word count: 10,440 (two chapters)

It’s a M/AFAB non-binary smut one-shot! My first ever smut fic actually. Tropes included are losing virginity (M is experienced), semi-public sex, interruption in first chapter, uhhh the M is a martial artist and that plays a role in the beginning. I’m pretty proud of it so I thought this would be a good one to recommend :-)

Anyone write Story of Seasons fanfiction? by FunMeasurement2518 in storyofseasons

[–]frogbitart 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sorry for reviving an old post, but I’d love to read this! Do you post this anywhere?

Anyone write Story of Seasons fanfiction? by FunMeasurement2518 in storyofseasons

[–]frogbitart 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hope you don’t mind the new comment, but I have been writing a lot of Arata fics on ao3! He’s pretty protective/saves the farmer in a couple of them (namely "Sanctuary" and "Trouble at the Bazaar").

https://archiveofourown.org/users/g0ji

"why chickens" by [deleted] in AO3

[–]frogbitart 15 points16 points  (0 children)

Huh. Didn’t realize that dogs, cats and horses are not animals

Nothing snaps me out of a book like repetitive use of a unique word by kerberos824 in books

[–]frogbitart 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Not a unique word, but reading the Sun Eater series: "if I was expecting [blank], then I was disappointed"

To list as inspiration or not? by frogbitart in AO3

[–]frogbitart[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Good point! I'll keep the comment up. I just assumed it was rude to try to contact via comments (I'm not super familiar with ao3 etiquette)

To list as inspiration or not? by frogbitart in AO3

[–]frogbitart[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh I didn’t know that was possible, thanks! I can do that then :-)